I'm enjoying your story so far and can't wait to read more! :) it's very interesting! Thanks for writing! :D

Love the story, My Dad's home from the hospital after being there for a week and some days, for having a stroke he's doing well he was discharge from the hosiptal wednesay night, he will have to go to rehab for six weeks since his mind is not a little too good, and for some other things. I'm glad he's home he's recovering one step at a time and, thursday was my Birthday. Lastnight we celebrated our Pastor wife birthday her birthday is the same date as me,  It was a great celebration I had a great time, we had a hat fashion show, singing, praise dance, poems and other things. Happy Valentine Day!!

My goodness the detail and emotion.  Hello people nomination ere!!!!  MORE!!

ZOMG... what a moving, heart-wrenching story!!  I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if there is any way to save Rin!  I can't begin to imagine the amount of time and effort you've put into crafting such an amazingly detailed and convoluted story... thank you so much for sharing it with all of us!!!!

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~~Wiccan~~

Aw it's so sad but I love it please hurry and post the next chapter please.

:hugs: Oh I hate when something like that happens! Although I'm sure you look at this new chapter five as not being as good as the original please know that I found it amazing. Poor little Shippou! I wonder how he and Sesshomaru will take Kagome's proposed idea. I'm sure she'll have to talk them into it somewhat, but I've a feeling she'll get her way.

Thanks for writing!

Since everything is in first person the switch in characters is still a little bit confusing but I do like that we can see the emotions and inner workings of everybody. Its quite an intersting story and yet so tragic at the same time. I almost don't want Kagome to take the sickness into herself. If only she could just suspend Rin until she found the flower. What happens when Kagome is rotting and the darkness finds her? I guess Rin and helping fix her pack come first and before trying to figure out what the darkness is and how to end it. I can't wait to see if this works and what happens next :)

I like the idea you have. Some of her training is starting to kick in. Now, how do we know Bokuseno hasn't been infected?

Please, please have there be some way Kagome can learn Something quickly so as to save Rin. :whimpers: I hate when Rin dies...

Loved Kaede's parting. Deaths are always painful but hers is by far my favorite. I only hope her soul in Kikyo is soothed to see Kagome again.

Thanks for writing!

UPDATE!!!!!!!

RIN CAN'T DIE!!!!!!!

WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!

WHY CAN'T SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO DIE, DIE?!?!?!!

COME ON!!!!!!!

I understand where you are coming from, but them meeting up with Kagome is not rushing it according to how the story is going. Once they meet up fully, then you can see where you want to tone it down from  there. The plot you have given seems to be really intricate and can take a while to develop fully. Loved this chapter really, can't wait for the reunion of Kagome and Shippo. Does Rin have to die?

Hi!!! ^.^ I love your story so far! It's really exciting. The plot has my full attention and it's like I'm stuck. I can't wait for you to update the next chapter. I agree that the plot does need to slow down a little but overall I think it's progressing rather well. Does Rin really have to die? Can't Kagome use some of the herb healing techniques that she learned from her sensei's wife? Like turning Rin into a youkai or curing her with that rare flower? Please don't kill off Rin! I love the story though....and I can't wait for the fated reunion of Kagome and her friends!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon. XD

I like where you have taken the story. Sometimes looking over things and changing them (sometimes completely) isn't bad at all. I am excited to see how everybody will now react and act around each other. I am looking forward to the new dynamic and all the planning for destroying this new evil that is quite old. I can't wait to see what will happen next :)

I like how this story is ging. The light has to start in the darkness somewhere in order to become a beacon of hope. Her seeing the death and destruction was a preview of what was to come to test her strength. She will become stronger I am sure. Keep up the great work and update soon please...I want to see the reunion!

ZYou need a chapter that puts things in perspective, and this was it. Loved it!

pretty freakin awesome 

update soon please!

I like the beginning of your story but you seem to change point of views randomly. whether it is between paragraphs, between sentences, or even within sentences. You should probably pick a point of view and stick with it (esp so that it doesn't become confusing...the reference to him as sesshoumaru but then all of a sudden I appears and starts talking). I can't wait to see where this goes next :)

Wonderful chapter dear! Very intriguing and an honest portrayal of Kagome. Let's see how she builds herself back up into a strong woman again and what lessons she has learned.