I think that you did great with the fight scene. It was NOT overly complex, nor did you drag it out by trying to show too many points of view for a minor battle.
Sometimes I think faster than I type and skip words. :S
Again, Great job!
~Starfyre
 
| I think that you did great with the fight scene. It was overly complex, nor did you drag it out by trying to show too many points of view for a minor battle. While this was a very dark and gruesome chapter, you did a very good job with it. Not too detailed, but not too vague either. I really enjoy this story and look forward to more of your excellent writting in the future. ~Starfyre    
 
rose (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Jun 2013 | next chapter please    
 | The fight scene was great, please update the next chapter quick. Keep it coming.    
 
mari (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Jun 2013 | loved it thanks for the update.      
 
tonya (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Jun 2013 | i thought the fight was well done, this was a great chapter! i look forward to what happens next.    
 
pclark (Chapter 14) - Tue 11 Jun 2013 | OMG, OMG; this is getting good, I aslmost can't wait for the next chapter.    
 | I loved this chapter. Update very soon please! I can't wait.    
 
tonya (Chapter 13) - Mon 03 Jun 2013 | excellent chapter!    
 
Kula (Chapter 13) - Mon 03 Jun 2013 | I just stumbled onto your story and couldn't stop reading it, looking forward to your updates.    
 | I know I started reading this when you first started posting. I am loving it so far, I favorited it so I can watch for more updates :)    
 
pclark (Chapter 13) - Sun 02 Jun 2013 | I do so love, majorly love this story. Hope too see regular updates.    
 
rose (Chapter 13) - Sun 02 Jun 2013 | next chapter please    
 | I've missed this story! You do such an amazing job with keeping all of them in character. I can't wait to read more of this wonderful tale! ~Starfyre    
 | I love how Sesshomaru knows everything about Kagome. Please update the next chapter quick, keep it coming.    
 
mari (Chapter 13) - Sun 02 Jun 2013 | loved the update.    
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