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kyrinnie (Chapter 4) - Sat 04 Jan 2014

I bet it was naraku!! he is truly evil!!

but... Poor rin.. I hope she's shy can see the good in side kagome and love blooms! 

Its... Sad but I so totally love it! Which is why u should update it ASAP!


Azumii (Chapter 4) - Sun 18 Sep 2011

>:O  WTF?!  Koga is a fu...  Meany!!!!  I do hope Kagome isn't going to be the useless damsel in distress in this story.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Update soon!!

xoxox


Smortz (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

-stashes whip for next chapter- >:3 this story is filled with awesomeness. Although I can't wait to see what Naraku does, he looks like he might be planning something. Hm, but I wants to know what is going to happen between Koga and Kagome. I was so sad when he was all 'where is she?" in the hospital. :( She is ALIVE, Koga.. BELIEEEEVE!

Can't wait for the next prompt.

~Smo >.>


Saraniya (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Sep 2011

Wow! That was a real tear jerker...but now I'm curious about the history of Sesshoumaru and his relation with Rin. Great Chapter!


TruGemini (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Sep 2011

Wonderful chapter. How will Kagome get out of this? Will she survive or just be another casualty of war?


Remi (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Aug 2011

Please update soon! Very good story, I can not wait to see where it goes. -Remi


Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Aug 2011

AHHH! and Awe im so in love with this story already please keep updating please!!(:


sugar0o (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

awe poor kagome! :[


shura (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

oh!!!!!! Go Sesshy!I cant wait for more!


Saraniya (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

Kouga's alive! I knew this story was going to be amazing!


Loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

And dun dun dunnnn...Kouga is alive!! I wonder how Ayame fits in though. She seems a bit stalkerish but I guess everyone needs a stalker to save their life. Although in Kagome's case, she'll take what she can get. I want to know who the dad and child are that are the cause for this. I thought for a second that Sesshoumaru was the father and Rin was the child but I guess tihs not the case. Whose ready for some stockholm syndrome. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Smortz (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

Poor Ayame... >.> Although I can understand Koga's thinking. 

Ugh! I want to charge into that bathroom and smack that creeper's face, and then chop off a certain organ that he may die without! =covers mouth and cackles=

I dunno though... I don't think Sesshoumaru could be labeled as a savior. I mean, sure he saved her from rape, but something tells me he's a bit more involved... Hmmmm... Who could he be? >_>
I dunno why, but I found myself trying to figure out

~Smo

Oh! Almost forgot but, yea, if Koga was lying injured in my bed, I would keep him for some -coughs- observations-coughs- too. >.>

 


Remi (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

I'm really impressed with this story. Please update soon. 


Smortz (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

Awe! I liked this! Sad too... Koga seemed like a good - but dead- guy.
~Smo 


KitElizaKing (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

You did  a really good job, with what must have been a really difficult chapter.  It was moving and touching, with Kagome dealing with Kouga's death, and yet there was also a sense of anticipation because you know that Sesshoumaru is right around the corner and destined to rock her world more than he already has.  Nice job.  Can't wait to read the rest.


sugar0o (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

O_O interesting


Nyuka (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

What no privacy?  Well thats just peachy aint it first you destroy the love then you lock her a way then you take away her dignaty...how tragic....XD good thing im just evil enough to enjoy that ...lol love what might become of this story.

 

Nyuka


Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

you have me intrested please write more and update(:


Caleesci (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

Wow I really like where this is headed! I actually love Koga so I am really glad you made him into a good guy :) so many people make him into an evil airhead that stalks her! And this story is really captivating... It doesn't seem like you struggled at all with the second chapter, though I know that quote was a difficult one (i totally cheated, skipped it and just did the prompt lol) but you made it really beautiful and really powerful. Really a stunning job!

 

Love,

Caleesci


Faeena (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Aug 2011

The suspense...its killing me....pleaseupdateanotherchapterbeforeIgomad....please?

 


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