And dun dun dunnnn...Kouga is alive!! I wonder how Ayame fits in though. She seems a bit stalkerish but I guess everyone needs a stalker to save their life. Although in Kagome's case, she'll take what she can get. I want to know who the dad and child are that are the cause for this. I thought for a second that Sesshoumaru was the father and Rin was the child but I guess tihs not the case. Whose ready for some stockholm syndrome. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Poor Ayame... >.> Although I can understand Koga's thinking.
Ugh! I want to charge into that bathroom and smack that creeper's face, and then chop off a certain organ that he may die without! =covers mouth and cackles=
I dunno though... I don't think Sesshoumaru could be labeled as a savior. I mean, sure he saved her from rape, but something tells me he's a bit more involved... Hmmmm... Who could he be? >_> I dunno why, but I found myself trying to figure out
~Smo
Oh! Almost forgot but, yea, if Koga was lying injured in my bed, I would keep him for some -coughs- observations-coughs- too. >.>
Remi (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
I'm really impressed with this story. Please update soon.
Smortz (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
Awe! I liked this! Sad too... Koga seemed like a good - but dead- guy. ~Smo
KitElizaKing (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
You did a really good job, with what must have been a really difficult chapter. It was moving and touching, with Kagome dealing with Kouga's death, and yet there was also a sense of anticipation because you know that Sesshoumaru is right around the corner and destined to rock her world more than he already has. Nice job. Can't wait to read the rest.
sugar0o (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
O_O interesting
Nyuka (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
What no privacy? Well thats just peachy aint it first you destroy the love then you lock her a way then you take away her dignaty...how tragic....XD good thing im just evil enough to enjoy that ...lol love what might become of this story.
Nyuka
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Aug 2011
you have me intrested please write more and update(:
Wow I really like where this is headed! I actually love Koga so I am really glad you made him into a good guy :) so many people make him into an evil airhead that stalks her! And this story is really captivating... It doesn't seem like you struggled at all with the second chapter, though I know that quote was a difficult one (i totally cheated, skipped it and just did the prompt lol) but you made it really beautiful and really powerful. Really a stunning job!
Love,
Caleesci
Faeena (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Aug 2011
The suspense...its killing me....pleaseupdateanotherchapterbeforeIgomad....please?
Faeena (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Aug 2011
-sobs- why'd you have to make it so sad-sobs some more-
But good job....still do sad...
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