Reviews for The Assistant by Smortz

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Grimmichi (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Feb 2013

*gasp* NOOO how could you cut off his beautiful hair!!!!


sillya (Chapter 9) - Sat 02 Feb 2013

Like it.


Cherry (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Jan 2013

Very well written but then again you are so. I'm enjoying the story. Keep it coming 


Pricila (Chapter 9) - Thu 03 Jan 2013

Welcome back, loved the chapter!!


RubyJeweler (Chapter 9) - Tue 01 Jan 2013

Masataro is such a cutie. Thank you for updating.


Nilee1 (Chapter 9) - Tue 01 Jan 2013

Wonderful, wonderful story!


lashon (Chapter 8) - Wed 23 May 2012

i like how he roped her into being his assistant & all the traveling they do, im so excited for the next update


Calypso (Chapter 8) - Sat 12 May 2012

The beginning was hilarious! I hope Kagome actually carries out what she thought about doing to Masataro and Lucas. And the beginning of their (S/K) relationship is here! Overall, a good chapter and I can't wait to see what you come up with for the next one.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 8) - Thu 10 May 2012

I'm really curious, now, of what happened to make Sesshomaru like this(besides the vague details). I want specifics...hahaha.

Thank you for updating.


henandchicks (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Oh, what a chapter!  I was rolling with laughter.  Shippo saying "I would think you were some sort of molester"  and then Sesshomaru saying "it was not one of my proudest moments!"  - priceless.  Just hilarious!  And then, with it all got real, with Kaagome asking what happened after she left.  I'm not sure I'm going to enjoy the next chapter, as it can't help but have a great deal of sadness in it (unless Sesshomaru can't bring himself to tlalk about it yet).  But I do love, love, love this story.  Wonderful storyline.  Hilarious!  Sweet!  Can't wait for more!


henandchicks (Chapter 5) - Wed 09 May 2012

I am loving this story!   Really entertaining.  You mentioned Kouga - I can't wait to see him again!  His interest in Kagome could spur Sesshomaru into action, after all.


joyouki (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

OMG I haven't laughed that hard from a chapter forever...The part where Sess's fingers got wrapped in her bikini top and he threw it...Oh my the giggles are starting again....Loved that chapter!


Pricila (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Wow, I am in love with your story and how you keep it all tied together as you takes us across the continent!  Can't wait to read the next chapter.


Pricila (Chapter 4) - Wed 09 May 2012

LOL, that is too funny Shipp? a model!   LOL


Alice (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Kagome is so cute when she is flustered. 


Kayelyn (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 May 2012

I know I should feel bad for Sesshomaru, and I do...somewhat, but that was too hilariously awkward for me to not laugh at his expense!

Thank you so  much for this update, and I hope that all goes well with your finals!

Love-kaye


Calypso (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

Wonderful, intriguing chapter as always, Smo! Sigh, poor Kagome. Shippo's all grown up now.

 

You leave me wondering what Sess will do the next chapter.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 7) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

Smo,

You are doing a mighty fine job of enthralling us. Hehehe. I cannot wait to see what Sesshomaru will do next, especially after the little stunt Kagome pulled(taking off dress;black bikini). I wonder if he is going to join her in swimming? That's something to wonder about. Haha. Thank you for updating.

RubyJeweler xD


Saraniya (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Apr 2012

Ooooh! Male hotness is always a great read :)


Saraniya (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

I loved Kagome's parting shot! It was awesome!!! I loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next :)


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