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Skyisthelimit (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

You. You. YOU!

Now you've gone and made me sad right before bed time. WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO ABOUT THAT NOW?

This was...this was...so...so...SAD!! **wails**

But beautifully written. And heartbreaking. And touching. And uniqe. And I'm going to stop blubbering now.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

yanno. this is amazing!

 


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

Since it's such a long story and I know I'll leave something out, I've decided to write my review as I go along. lol.

First, I love the quote prompt!

I've never read a science fiction fanfic before so I have nothing to compare it to; however, so far I am finding this to be amazing. The details and writing style is fantastical, Lady B.

I absolutely LOVED this line: "But if it will soothe your human sensitivities, I command you to do the aforementioned task, please." I giggled uncontrollably for a few minutes when I read it.

Also, haha.

"Hn.”

“Did you just snort at me?”

“No.”

He totally did snort at her! He's such a liar! lol.

Awww... oh no! Does that mean Kagome's never getting her memories back? D=

That was nice of Sesshoumaru. To show her the research and sort of give her back her memories. Although whether he did it just to be nice or to resume the mission... who knows? lol.

Haha. "You are a constant cause for concern." Sesshoumaru is concerned about her. Aww.

Awww. I like their little interaction here:

“You have performed and completed all of your tasks excellently,” he said before adding chidingly, “despite your initial delays.”

“Look, I was depressed…”

“I am as you humans call it, kidding you.”

“I know you are!  You’re such a dick for being a computer program, sir.”

“Yes, I am, but it must be said that my newly acquired bad habits are clearly derived from my association with you.”

“You know what…?!” she began, and then she noticed his smirk.  “You’re so bad!”

That was so cute!

Oohhh, that was practically a confession from Sesshoumaru! Looks like computer programs have emotions after all, eh? lol

Woah. Kagome made him a body. lol. Niiiice.

lol. "I'm a Sesshoumaru of my word." Great line. XD

Awwww... so tragically sweet. They love each other, but one is human and the other a computer. They can never be together. ><;;; Because at some point, the human will die. It's amazing that as old as Kagome is after sixty six years after awakening, it hasn't affected the never-aging Sesshoumaru at all. Maybe because he's a computer? I don't know.

And yes, that ending was sweet too. Sesshoumaru did that so the memory of Kagome would live on forever and so that he, himself, would never forget her. That's so touching and it was such a great read. Thanks for that, Lady B.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Aug 2011

Aww Lady B!!!!! *cries* That was so sad! I know you hate writing romance, but srsly, you should write it JUST NOT SO DARN SAD!!!!! Ugh I love your writing but sometimes i just want to strangle you lol. Awesome job, very bittersweet and oh so heart wrenching.


1CarinoInu (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Aug 2011

Hi Lady B:  I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this little one-shot.  Fantastic imagry and such strong emotions....fantastic!

 


JeniNeji (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Aug 2011

I enjoyed it very much. You are a talented writer and I like the relationships yiu build with Kagome/Sesshomaru. They are refreshing :)


Kirai (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jul 2011

I loved this Lady B this was freaking awesome. SO hard to choose between you and Skye. I don't know what to do!!! It was sooo good!


naqaashi (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Jul 2011

There's a lot to say, but I think you can guess what it is, and I'm betting that the people who reviewed before me have said it all, already. So all I will say is the thing that will stay with me most - I've never read a story this bittersweet and cruel that I loved quite so much.


summerbirdy (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

I simply adore this one. I love history, and this sure was filled with it. I love the way you wrote this.

It made me wish there was more of this story. Much more. ^^


Luna (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

That anonymous was me @_@ I hadnt realized I wasnt logged in when I wrote that. Sorry!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

OMg I got freaking loved this story sooo much! There was such exquisite detail, and such lovely romance towards the end that I ended up grinning like an idiot and having my beau ask me what the hell that goofy smile was. Excellent as always, Lady B.


Madison (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

I always love your writing and I enjoy how different it is from the other stories I usually read. You always allow at the end the reader's mind to keep working and I adore that. I fell in love with the setting that you provided for us and despite the length of your story, at the end I was staring at my screen with open eyes going "Wait - what - it's done already?" When you write something, I always crave for more!


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

This is such a good story. Every assumption I made was wrong, and that is so nice. Usually things are svery predicatable in fanfiction and I can honestly say I was able to predict nothing in this. Which you already knew, lol. The ending totally had me reeling, I'm wondering what it would take to bribe you into a short sequel that tells what happens next? I know you don't like romance, but would you make an exception if I let you make me a ramp for awhile? I won't even complain lol. Great read!


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

O.O wow.... don´t know what else to say, just... WOW!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

this is amazing !!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

LADY B!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!! <33333 srsly this was EPIC and you did an awesome job on it!! Please don't leave it as a one shot I wanna know what happens!


QuothTheDragon (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

Holy crap...wow

 

There are no mroe words to describe it. I really got sucked into the story, and I believe that you put a unique creative twist on the prompt. I want to read about Kags training with ninjas now though @.@

 

Thanks so much for writing this!

 

~QuothTheDragon


Hairann (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

Oh wow B-chan, that was amazing.  Not surprising since you wrote it, but I loved it.  So very unique and just a perfect ending!


Priestess Skye (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

Wow!  Love love LOVE!  I told you that you were epic! Updata soon!


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