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Drosselmeyer (Chapter 2) - Tue 10 Nov 2020

This is just straight up amazing. I had forgotten to leave a review before because it was late when I read it, and then it left me emotional. So, I apologize for that. I love this. There are not enough space fics, and this one is just brilliant. I love how they are there for each other when everything goes wrong and how he finds something akin to humanity in her. Their relationship is so sweet and unique, and seeing the care at the end and then how he keeps her living on through his memories was heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Last line brings me to tears. Well done! 


susie (Chapter 4) - Sat 31 Oct 2020

lol, well, i guess that's fair.  you don't cut the royal hair XD


susie (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Oct 2020

so many years later, and you still make me cry with this.  i love authors who can do that.  but, like, responsibly lol.  deep, powerful stuff.  and now i want a sesshoumaru computer i can make fall in love with me.  its 2020, we can't be that far off...


akane342 (Chapter 4) - Sat 31 Oct 2020

THE FEEEEEELSSSS :(

 

Thank you for this beautiful series! 


SHORTFRY (Chapter 2) - Tue 13 Oct 2015

Wow, this is majestic... And I am at a loss for words. Well done at making me cry again! This was beautiful


Bookwrm150 (Chapter 2) - Wed 21 Mar 2012

Oh, my, lord. I have tears streaming down my face. That was sooo touching! I can't stop crying! there's no way i'm falling asleep now...


Jai (Chapter 2) - Sun 23 Oct 2011

Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term!

 

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

 

Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/

 

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Tessitura (Chapter 4) - Sun 16 Oct 2011

great stories!!!  such talent has not been wasted...hope to see more in the future!!


CookieAsylum (Chapter 2) - Sat 15 Oct 2011

D;
That had me in tears. Poor Kagome.
But I'm still happy in the end because she did such wonderful things for Sesshoumaru and the everyone else.
-grabs more tissue-

<3 


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 4) - Sat 15 Oct 2011

HA! The locusts ate my clothes! Hahahaha, next time I have a tequila fuled episode I'm totally gonna use that lmao.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA his hair! And after he helped them too! Bahahahahaha

AND HE TOOK THEIRS OFF! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! That was freakin awesome! And NO pie! lmao. I love it! <3


Luna (Chapter 4) - Sat 15 Oct 2011

lol too funny


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 3) - Sat 15 Oct 2011

Mmmmm, Sessh in a fedora = <3

Hahahaha, Sesshomaru sounds like a sneeze! XD

Alright, so I think this was really wonderfully done. The small bit of comedy where everyone gave him grief over his name fit right with the old fashioned murder stories from the fifties and that era, which happen to be a fav of mine. The bit with Jaken was neat too, since Jaken is usually a minion not a partner. I have to wonder though, what the full story is behind his termination at the police department and Rin and Kouga and all that. I get the underlying parts I think, where Kouga killed Rin, but I am curious about the rest of that story too.

I also like how you tied Miroku into everything. He played it better than I think any of the other characters would have, him being the manwhore and all.

The end was sad. I kind of had a suspicion Kagome was the woman in the beginning, or maybe Kagura, but i wasn't expecting her to be dead. Kidnapped, of doing something on her own maybe, but not dead. I'm glad the way it ended she got her piece though. All in all, I think it was a very good fic. So kudos and pie, as usual. <3


Allyonora (Chapter 4) - Sat 15 Oct 2011

hahahahaha! I can't stop laughing! The greatest tragedy of all!

Awesome job!


Alpine (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Oct 2011

These are really well written. I cried during chapter 2 on this story. It was so horrible that she had to die but also happy that Sess found 'happiness' even though he was a software program.

I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
Hugs

Alpine ^_^


Jai (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Sep 2011

This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

 

Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

 

Our official website can be found here:

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The current nominations pages are here:

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Check them out to see what you were nominated for!

 

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Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!

 

 

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Madison (Chapter 2) - Tue 16 Aug 2011

I don't often have nothing to say in a review, but this time I don't. AND ITS NOT BECAUSE IT WASN'T GREAT. (Dear God I would never say anything of yours was not good even if it was (which is not the case right now), BECAUSE IM SCARED OF THE --- PIE. Yes, lets keep it PG-13. AND THE BIKE. AND THE STICK, and you know where I'm going with this).

Anyways, (I just wrote a lot for a girl who had nothing to say ahah). No but seriously, you blew my mind with this. I've read all of your stuff, and I know how amazing you can be, but this like took it to another level. I mean, I wish this was like way the heck longer, (not that its not perfect the way it is, cause it's freaking awesome), but I wish it was like 900 pages. In a book format. In my hands. Ahaha. Then it would be easier on my eyes to read over and over again. 

SO. YEAH. I HATE YOU FOR BEING AMAZING AT WRITING.

-throws a pie- 

YEAH. Its a celebration pie. Cause your story had me all chocked up. It doesn't happen often. You did good. 


cakeiton (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Aug 2011

So good I had to review twice! Truly brilliant, this will be a story that sticks with me for a long long time.


cakeiton (Chapter 2) - Thu 11 Aug 2011

Him as a somputer program, perfect! I was laughing! Their banter was great.

SYMPHONY OF SCIENCE! Nice touch.

I really really enjoyed this one. I thought the development was great and her garden amazing. I started shocked, then laughed, felt all warm and fuzzy, and ended up crying a little in the end. Beautifully done!


Kirai (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

OMG OMG OMG OMG! That was one of the best fics i think i have ever read on Dokuga! I LOVE YOU LADY B!!! So going on my favourites.


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

So I'm reviewing this as I go, so I don't forget to say anything, which I do sometimes. SO if it seems random, that's why.

I like how you made Sesshomaru a program, but the commander basically as well. Fits his character even though he is not a physical being in this.

HA! You will serve as my self-repair equipment, lieutenant. :x He always manages to tell her you will serve me somehow. Even as a program! Hahaha!

And he still manages to put her in her place as such! Everyone is so in character, though I would expect nothing less from you, lol.

Ok, so creating his name from his program title was genius. Epic win there.

Mou, and he was an ass about her going back into her pod. :/ I knew she wasn't going back but still. Mean ol' Sesshomaru.

Aww, ok at least he gave her some insight to her life. And he is worried for her health, though I don't know yet if it's only for the mission or if you hid a slight romance in here somewhere.

@_@ I'm glad he told her he wouldn't help her die. And it's good he told her he would miss her. Both of them would be very lonely without the other. I like that.

So good, she has something useful to do during her years there. Her character needs to help people, and this is a sure way for her to do that even though right now she is alone. He gave her a great purpose to fill her even though she is stuck in a tragic situation.

I learned something in this! I didn't know pretty much any of that about stars. I didn't know our own sun would not explode either. Good to be aware lol. Yay for learning!

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!! I knew it was coming but damn! So tragic. And the computer fell in love with her too! -cries- I hate and luv you right now!

Omg @_@ The ending! It's beautiful but so sad! -cries more- This was a beautiful tragedy in all definitions of the words. You know I usually hate tragedy and angst, I've never been shy about that fact. But I loved this, truly. And one of these days I will make you write a real romance dammit! You would do it so well! -shakes fist at- But seriously, wonderful job. I'm glad all the frustration this caused you paid off so well. It was well worth reading. ♥


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