You should definitely make a sequel. Actually made my eyes tear up when Kagome passed away. Love this story. Can't thank you enough for writing it.

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Oh my. Beautiful and heartbreaking and hopeful all rolled together. 

Quothy-chan!! That was beautiful!! I love the idea, it was highly original! Can I be selfish and ask you for a squel?? Please? I'll bribe you with cookies??? :D

wonderful story. im glad that in the end he got her back.

Just fantastic. Purely fantastic.

OMG!! THAT WAS SO FREAKING SAD! I loved it. Such an amazing story.

Finally! A happy story! ::sniffs:: I could huggle you and dreamy right now....

A second time to read this and still it is breathtaking. You have written an amazing story!

Thanks for the "you might want a tissue" warning!

Though it was terribly sad, it was an amazing piece of writing, and written wonderfully! I adored it. 

D: Sad! But happy too, at least he will find her again. Good job!

OMG i'm in tears! that was so... wow!

That was very sweet.  I liked the fable, and I liked seeing a story with Kagome as an older woman.  It really grounds the story and makes it more relatable to those of us trapped on this mortal coil.  Your writing technique is good, but I found it was even better as the story progressed.  As for a little critique, I think Sesshoumaru was a little too revolted by people in the beginning.  I think disinterested would have worked better, as if they were beneath his notice.  Like ants to us.  It's only when ants are in our house or food that we care about them, otherwise we don't even see them.  I think that mindset is more applicable to Sesshoumaru.  Unless humans are trying to mess with him, they don't deserve his attention.  By treating it like that, his affection for Rin and later Kagome becomes more believable.  They've earned his attention.  Overall, a lovely story.  I enjoyed it.

Very Nicely done, Quoth. It had the right amount of somber to make the idea work.

I liked it, Keep up the good work!

Velvy

This was lovely

Aw very sweet and very sad :). (Though I had won the challenge I did not cry muahahahah) but I love the story none the less :) very very beautiful and a job well done!

Yay! It's posted! Love it ^_^

I don't have much to say except WOW! That was a wonderfully complete and delightful story. I think it was beautifully spun and left us with plenty of hope for love with our favorite hero. Keep writing please :)

I loooved it! It was so sweet!

*sobs silently* why is it so! tell me it is not so! *cries some more* stupid hormones -_- your story is amazing, it blended in so well and i hope that sesshomaur has his hope and his back

with all its sadness, I really like this. It's beautiful. And best part is, there's hope for him. ^^ Good job!!