Please!!!! Please continue this!!!!!! I have only just found it!!!!! This is a really interesting story!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! This Akitomi wants more story!!!!!!
Hm, interesting, interesting! I'm a bit curious, how did Inu no Taisho survive in your story? In cannon he died, so I'm interested in seeing your reason for him to be alive... Also, your storyidea intrigues me, so I'll be looking forward to another chapter! ^.^
Ceysna (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Aug 2011
0.0 oooo.... Interesting place to leave off. I like where this is going! More please! More with the updating! K?Thx.Bi!
Brandie (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Aug 2011
I just read your first 3 chapters and can not wait for the rest please update soon.
Sabrina (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
Love this story..
Azumii (Chapter 2) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
Wow I really, really love where this is going. So well written and the story is well thought out. Please keep up the awesome work!! Update soon puhlease!! :D :D
xoxoxo
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
absolutly wonderful beginning i cant wait for the next chapter of this story.
CMF (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
Well, it's a good start although it has some time story mistakes, when Kagome turns 15 she fells down the well and travels 500 years into the past, so now she traveled 500 years into the future but inutashio was alive, and so there is the mistake, at least make her travel 700 years into the future, so that maybe inuyasha didn't exist. Then when her soul is ready (when she is 15) the well would call her to the time period she is needed (500 years before). Aside from this I really think is a good start I'm looking forward for your updates :)
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