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Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Sep 2011

Although part of me is disappointed he didn't take her already simply because I was expecting it I'm actually really glad we'll have more lead-in time and chance for relationship growth. Should be interesting with Kagome at the Palace.

Thanks for writing!


randomfan17 (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Sep 2011

No! I want to read the next chapter T-T this sucks, i have to wait a while. Love child, lol, never would have connected that term with Inuyasha, he's not that sweet. Kagome needs to hit her brother, being a man ho that early, hope he doesn't learn the hard way it's not safe and it's not safe to keep tampons away from a woman on her period, lol. I loved this chapter! Please update soon!


randomfan17 (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Sep 2011

I think i like Jabora even more than Aimaru and that's hard to beat. Poor Jabora though, he should have known that Sesshomaru is completely staight and that his fantasy for Sesshomaru is every girls dream but it's not gonna happen for any of us except Kagome any time soon, hehe. I love this story so far, have to keep reading.


Ceysna (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Sep 2011

O.O you're back?!? YOU'RE BACK!?!? AMAZING!!! *offers ever-lasting ductape for you and your imagination, plus the 1-866 number for the company that baites traps and then captures plunnies and delivers them straight to your door!* Please don't leave again. Your stories are veeeeeeeery nice. :^D and this one... I'm DIIIIIIIIEING to know what happens! X^3

Nice to see you again, hope you can write some more and life is good for you. Stay awesome!


rss (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Sep 2011


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 


plz update soon! 


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Booyaka! New chapter!

Have to say I'm not a fan of Souta's new man-whore status. :pouts: Yes, it's funny... but I prefer him as the sweet and helpful little brother. Still... perhaps there's some of that base personality remaining inside him.

And Kagome's right: no one should steal a girl's necessaries around that time of the month. O_O Unless they're suicidal or masochistic.

Honestly I'm surprised Sesshomaru's giving her that much time to look at him. I expected him to be after her before she climbed out of the well.

Hope Jabora's innocence is proven. :ponders: Did they somehow not know of Inuyasha? how... odd.

Thanks so much for writing!


thebookworm90 (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Ooh! This is getting good!! I can't wait for the next chapter.


Alexandra (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

uh oh! Kagome better watch out! I wonder what will happen next?! Please update soon!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

TEASE! more please!


lashon (Chapter 2) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

well, at least he got some releif :) kagpme's gonna be in for a treat when she finds him


Sunset Senshi (Chapter 2) - Fri 29 Jul 2011

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update I love it and can't wait for Kagome's reaction.


poi (Chapter 2) - Thu 28 Jul 2011

Please update soon! I've been dying to find out what happens next!


Ceysna (Chapter 2) - Wed 22 Jun 2011

O.O wow... So far, So hot! Looking forward to the next update!


GreyEcho (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

XD I like your characters. and Oh does Kagome have a surprise waiting for her. I can't wait fo the next chapter. XD


SickMuse (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

Great so far. You know if you write things well enough then you don't have to worry about characters being OOC. I've seen Kagome written with curves but the author did a wonderful job of developing it and making it go with the character. The same can be said with fluffy Sesshomaru or funny Sesshomaru, if you develop it well enough then it's not OOC. I think the problem with your other fic wasn't the style or the fact that the characters doing things that were OOC, I think it was a lack of development and attention to detail. You should try to improve as a writer instead of just making disclaimers so people will accept mediocrity. Just my thoughts. Thanks for the chapter.


Saphireanime (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

interesting! I'm waiting now to see more of this! Aimaru's crazy little brother isn't going to like kagome, but i kidna hope kagome puts him in his place. BAMFkagome♥


Alpine (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

Just wonderful. It's a great start to what I think will be a great story. I look forward to the first interactions between Sess and Kags. Some good old lovin must be sure to follow then.

Hugs for now

Alpine ^_^


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

o.o and i thought Aimaru was a pain for Sess.  *goes to read next chapter*


Alexandra (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Jun 2011

Very interesting fanfiction. Sesshoumaru horny makes me giggle. X3 I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!

 

Awesome job on the new characters. Will we find out more about Jabora and Aimaru?


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