good but to short

It would be great to make this into a chapter story or a series of one shots! The plot was great and the way it was written made me imagnie it vividly and see how it would be like had it not been the written work of art that it is but a visual one... <3

I liked that kagome is in power! It's a nice chage I agree

I really like this. There were a couple of spelling mistakes but nothing that can't be easily corrected. I like the concept and thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Although a little short it was and is a good read.

that was soo good!

wonderful, nice twist to the plot, she is the one in power, and he wants to marry her! I hav e never seen this done, pure genius!