Love this story and wish there was more of it :(

Any chance of an update for it soon? Please?

Great story, keep it coming.

This story is GRATE!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

UPDATE!

UPDATE PLEASE!

^^ loved the chapter! It was cute at the end at how he started to open up to her and I really love how you developed the story over time not just BAM next thing you know you're not even a paragraph in before the cloths come off. Kagome seems a little ooc but you explained it nicely in the story, please keep writting I have this story as one of my favorites!

wowwwwww!!!!this is my kagome!!!!yes, a little lesson for the most hottest of the inus. i follow your history from aff....you are a great writter. (sorry  for my english, but i`m from argentina, ande never follow studying english but i can talk italian, portugese and french) well  maybe i speak so much...i hope know about your history soon....kisses!

The beginning of the story was mystical, promising a new adventurous storyline. I was touched by how ruthless Sesshoumaru wanted to start a family, by softness in him when he was speaking of pups. That `s what distinguishes this story from others.

Then everything went simple. Kagome and Sesshoumaru are destined to be together. Inuyasha conveniently disappeared. Stupidity of Seshoumaru amazed me, but this to be expected with his disdain for humans. Over time, the story becomes more and more complex and confusing. A mixture of fairy tales and action with unexpected plot twists.

The story evokes a lot of conflicting emotions and keeps me in suspense. Nevertheless I like this tale so far.

I liked the chapter where the bitter loneliness brought them (sessh/kag) together. It is very realistic. Inu nurses Rin, it`s sweet and warmly depicted. And most of all I like Sesshoumaru `s hidden softness in this story.

Hmmmm, I wonder ...... did Sessh just manipulate Kags into being calm? I don't get it, did she submit or not? And will Sessh love her eventually, or does he already?

I like the story, though turning her into a demon is a little cliche. Did that hag-who-wasn't-a-hag-but-was-in-the-end have something evil in plan in store for the two of them, or did she just smile for Kags's indomitable nature?

Questions, questions .... Sry about them ):P

Do update as quick as you can though, it's nicely written :D

~lily

Gee, I wonder what the next chapter could be? ^_~

lmao WORK PUPPY! WORK!!!

Oh please,please,please....update!!!!

good chapter. If you dont mind i would like to see more sess/kag action.

I'm reviewing!! I do like this chapter, though, will a hag make another apperence?

can't wait to read the next Chapter

really getting into it. cant wait for the nxt 1!

thanks for keeping me in suspense for soooo long. please update sooner. lol. anyway the story is getting good keep up the good work

Great story!  Can't wait to find out what happens next! 

i cant believe that inuyasha actually believed that she would be happy anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^

Awsome new plot with an interesting twist *3*

Me likes~

Wan Moer!~

And welcome to Dokuga ^^!

OMG!!!! not fair clifhanger keep going. its very good *happy dance* what happents to kagaome???