Oh, I really liked this. I could almost see it expanded upon slightly. It was very well written
You break my heart, Chie...! :'(
This story is so sad...! I demand a sequel! I know that it's not unusual for a shogun to have concubines, but he has a wife for goodness' sake. At least, give her a little respect as his wife even if he prefers concubines.
I am so glad that I live in modern era. No offence, but I really hate this kind of story with no happy ending. I mean, reality is already cruel enough and nothing is fair. I feel like crying, and you have to take responsibility! :(
Anyway, I'm looking forward to Dramatic!. :D
Dude (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
So not fair please continue this please I love how you have portrayed Kagome. Please please
Angel_16 (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
This is about to make me cry, and I love it. Please write more
Oh please continue this!! It was so good and I would love to see more..
Darkness (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
Please..this is so sad. I'm on tears...it's really heartbreaking. I hope there'll be a sequel...I know real life doesn't always have a happy ending. However, please let this one have a happy ending!!!
loveread (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
beAutiful and heartbreaking- i hope you make a story of it. It would be an excellent read....
(Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
mou, stupid Sess. *throws c0okie at him*