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Reviews for Retribution by MissTeak

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Heather Miller (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Jun 2011

Heather Miller (Chapter 4) - Sun 12 Jun 2011

Wow this is such a thrilling story!! I'm reading this at 12:12am in the dark and every little sound in my home was making me turn my head expecting the man in the white robe to be standing there! I just love a good thriller and this literally has me on the edge of my seat wanting more! I can't wait to see how you bring Kagome and Sesshoumaru together in this story. Update ASAP!! :-)

                                                                                                                           Heather


sheridan (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

ooooh this is amazing!!!! i love scary stories!!!! i cant wait to read more I'm so excited :D


Luna (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

Wow you're totally right! He's such a jerk!! But from the tone of it, maybe he has a past of people claiming the supernatural...? I cant wait for the next update!!


kkprincessofdarkness (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011
eeeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!! scary no hell!!!!!!!!!!!!love it and want more mwa mwa KKPOD

Aimee Simmons (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

hehehe...  iinteresting.  I look forward to the next chapter.

 


Kamiki (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

I am seriously spooked out! I *love* this :) Can't wait to read more


LittleSingingBird (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

Ohhhh its getting good!! ^grabs bowl of popcorn^ And I like how you introduced Sesshoumaru, no frills and nothing too fancy just enough to make us want to kiss him and strangle him at the same time lol :3!! But you did a great job on this chapter and I dont blame Kagome on going into the bathroom, I do the same thing when I'm scared something is in my house or I just saw a scary movie and I get paranoid....god forbid my mom sends me into the basement for anything T_T, shaking like a leaf. But I cant wait until the next chapter!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

Sesshoumaru is such a nasty man.  Why is he so against the idea of the 'supernatural?'  Seems like there's more there we're not seeing.

I'm really dying to find out the story behind Kagome's family and the mansion.....but I'll be patient as the story unfolds.

Great update!


Naiadine (Chapter 4) - Sat 11 Jun 2011
Okkkaaay.... I'm scared. *shivers and hides under the blanket* ^ Proof that you write in a convincing way. *back to hiding*

rss (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

that was naraku, was it not?


Zinoviya (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Jun 2011

The incident with the ghost and the swing was sooo scary! Totally creeped me out. Ooh, the police are now involved. I hope Kagome doesn't look like a fool when she realizes the intruder is probably another ghost.


ladydemon (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

This is brillant.  I love these kind of stories. And you are setting up the scene so beautifully. It's well written and the flow of the story is great.

I can't wait until the next chapter. Thank you for writing this.


Tana_san (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

Curiouser and curiouser...there is not always a scientific explanation for everything. Some things just are what they are...and some things should be left alone...and then there are others that should not be messed with at all if you have no idea what you're doing. Tread lightly dear Kagome, one never knows what could happen when dealing with the netherworld...   I'm hooked!  JEN


(Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

ooo! An update so fast! I love this new chapter. I see that one spirit is trying to protect her and the other is wanting to hurt her. OOO!, I love it!


Luna (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Jun 2011

Oh my gawd, I literally got the creeps while reading this chapter. You write horror so well! I understand why you'd need to wrap yourself in a warm blanket while writing it @_@

Brr... lol I'm going to have to read something happy now before I go to bed ^_~


(Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Jun 2011

OMG! It's Naraku! I know it!. This story is so perfect its scary. I have it on par with some of the mildly scary manga that's out there. OH! I just want to read more of it. 


SashaMarie (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 May 2011

Please update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next. I love it so far. Thanks


1CarinoInu (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 May 2011

Oooo, this is really starting out good.  I've already gotten a few chills just from the ending of chapter 2.  A mysterious specter is walking the halls of the old mansion.....I love this and am looking forward the plot thickening!

 


Hoshinofuru (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 May 2011

First of all let me say that I'm so happy you're back to writing, I was missing your stories. Now about this story, it's awesome, it scares me and thrills me at the same time, every time you describe the picture on the staircase (is it kikyo?) my heartbeat accelerates, can't stop reading, keep up the good work, loving it!!!!!


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