It's nice to see Kagome is back in high spirits. What did the baby do to the shirt O_o
| I liked that the characters acted close to canon while being different enough to reflect the different situations. I didn't like how it switched perspective so often (might be cause of that prologue/chapter 1 merger...?), was kinda disorientating, the idea is good it just could have been done with like half the frequency. I hope Kagome acts Tsundere to Sesshomaru in later chapters ^^      
 
Kristen (Chapter 16) - Wed 30 May 2012 | Really?! :[ I am now extremely sad. Good thing yous said there will be weekly updates :]    
 
Kristen (Chapter 15) - Wed 30 May 2012 | Why you guys no kiss yet? Sorry, I had to. But, seriously, it's time for them to give each other some love :]    
 
Kristen (Chapter 14) - Wed 30 May 2012 | The last part was my favorite of the chapter, I think. It seems as if things are starting to progress into more intimate territory :D    
 | YOU CAN'T JUST END IT THERE!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
 ~Sandreline
    
 
Kristen (Chapter 13) - Tue 29 May 2012 | Another amazing chapter, this couple is just too cute :]    
 
Kristen (Chapter 12) - Tue 29 May 2012 | I'm actually going to a University (and college) for the first time this coming fall. I'm already stressed with just the thought of everything I'll have to do, so I commend you in having the time and patience to sit and right for us. Thank you so very much, and I really, really enjoy this story :]    
 
Kristen (Chapter 11) - Tue 29 May 2012 | This was a very cute chapter :] I enjoyed it very much. I think the next chapter will be my last for the night, so I hope it's really good! (Which I have no doubt it will be)    
 
Kristen (Chapter 10) - Tue 29 May 2012 | I'm very much anticipating Shesshoumaru's reaction to their little surprise visit :] I can't wait. Good thing I don't have to.    
 
Kristen (Chapter 9) - Tue 29 May 2012 | I'm going to be so tired for work in the morning, but I can't help but keep reading! This is definitely a great story, and you have a great tallent.    
 
Kristen (Chapter 8) - Tue 29 May 2012 | Sesshoumaru, calm youself. Stressing me out :[    
 
Kristen (Chapter 7) - Tue 29 May 2012 | Now that's what I'm talking about. I love when Sesshoumaru eats his words (in cases such as this). Never underestimate a woman.    
 
Kristen (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 May 2012 | I can see myself losing sleep over this story :] I'm in love.    
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