Oh, my.  I've finally caught up and all  I can say is...dayum!  This plot is wickedly fierce! I didnt see any of this coming. I can usually untwist a plot and unravel it three times before the ending.  But this story?  Nope.  I'm enjoying every pulsating moment of "what the heck" and "dang!" and "vavoom".  Looking for more, and things are layering up into something amazing.

Though I appreciate the story and its original plot (the summary drew me in right away, like a snap!), I have a few laments against Inumama. I know that her character was placed there to explain Sess's stoic facade, and to place the seeds of pity in Inuyasha and the reader alike. However, I feel that her character was very one-dimensional. Tell me, what words come into your mind when you hear her name? Cruel, heartless. It's evidence of your clever plotplay, but her cruelty seems to be too extreme.

Even Tiger Mothers have limits. Amy Chua does admit that she had to strike compromises with her children, and she has a good intention. Inumama seems to be like the Tiger Mother, and you have painted her in a fierce light. However, is it okay to see some shards of humanity through (though she's clearly not human...)?

Thanks for reading this review. Needless to say, I'm a fan ;-)

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! I can't even breathe I'm laughing so hard. I love how you have him calm and in controland with just a few words turn him into this pacing nervous sort of wreck and it works so well. Plus, I can just see him all bug eyed aboutt Kagome and later Rin's heat cycle. HILARIOUS. I forsee a freak out in the near in the next chapter. ::cackles::

J0o ARE SO EVILLL!

I think I'm done for tonight~

I will bring back the review monster tomorrow (:

TT^TT So lovely!!

Yay! Dancing! :D! I like how he has matching robes!

ME WANTZ MORE PIECES!

:D! New side story! YAYYY!

hmmm can these be possible friends for our miko???

Ohhh interesting snippet about these twins!

D: Will people try to take the shikon from her? This girl is starting issues!

Ahahaah BAD DOG!

Yes! You have extended them! XD

I thought this seemed longer XD

XD! I remember these from DDN!!

Ohh! Interesting (:

XD Oh SHippou and his...mighty power XD

Awwwww! I can just see the lights now! beautiful imagery!!!!

Aww that was so beautiful, Lyra!!! I love it all!!!

Hmmm questions questions!