Awesome! Kagome is having her power moment. Can't wait to find out more about these ladies...

So wait...Kagome is allowing her power to guide her to demons who are there that she can trust, is that what your author note telling us? Lol I enjoyed how Kagome seem to easily fluster Sesshomaru and how he allows her to do her own thing instead of telling her stuff like 'no you can't do that cuz of this or that'. Tehe and that Kagome is badass and shows her strength by burning those idiots. <3 As always, looking forward to more!

i can totally see her just being the exact same as sess onely with her words and ruthless shows of power, not so muc in battle but still able to slay just as easily. I rather love this. :3

Okay first off I am delighted to see Shippo and Rin back in the story! I'm also delighted with your take on how Sesshomaru feels for Rin. That he can even acknowledge to him self and then to Kagome how he sees her is unique among this fandom. She isn't mate or daughter (by blood) but something else and the way he says it speaks so much to what she is to him. I'm also pleased with how you have Sesshomaru acknowledge shippo; again its unique because he isn't dismissing him or pushing training on him. He knows that shippo has seen and done much already even for a demon and respects that. I agree with him, Kagome tends to underestimate shippo, but he grows strong and well due to her nurturing as well. I'm just so excited to see this aspect fleshed out.

Moving onto Sesshomaru and Kagome and what will happen during the umm ritual? Ceremony?  I'm really looking forward to see how they both participate and capture each other with everything. The animalistic and grace of Sesshomaru and the futuristic and sensual of Kagome coming together. There plus I'd love to see Sesshomaru's and the other youkai's reaction to our modern dancing, dirty <3

Loved it and agree; Shippo is stronger then Kagome gives credit!  Can't wait till the next chapter.

This makes for a sweet chapter. Onward!

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If she wronged him, she should totally have to make it up to him >:3 This was cute i rather liked it! *throws more c0okies in your gneral direction* :333333

Uh, WOW! This chapter was spectacular. You are so talented! This will be a re-read chapter for sure.  Awesomeness...just love it!

Ooooh....just bee-yu-te-full!!!!! Fireworks galore!

good!!! Keep going!

~*Dragon*~

0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i love those! what a great way to have a mating! so much more brilliant then the common biting of her neck! *has shiney eyes* more!

A beautiful mating ceremony. Hopefully, we get to the Inuyoukai version of a honeymoon...maybe? Wonder what happens with Inuyasha though. Onward!

Considering that I just sat down and read all of your chapters of amazingness, I feel unsatisified and hungry for more. XD lol I also want to shout out 'On Wards!' in hopes of chapter magically appearing before me, mainly focused on Sesshomaru and Kagome and the festival. Of course as a reader this is very selfish of me, and I do apologize for that :) It's hard not to crave something so good, ya know? 

Anyways, as part of an actual review, I like to comment on how much I enjoy your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshomaru. The conflicting of emotion vs their actions, how Sesshomaru is willing himself to deny his feelings while in the next moment he is 'breeding' more of them by indulging in everything that is Kagome. As well as Kagome's stance on taking charge of her life, choosing to go with Sesshomaru, choosing to learn all that she can about the culture she is now going to live in and all that it means. However, I also find it in these little things that you've done with them that I really enjoy, the slips of Sesshomaru's tongue, lol not only between her legs, but when he says how he feels unintentionally and how Kagome has started to call Sesshomaru mate, or simply the way she 'snuck up' on him and gave him a shoulder rub while soothing his worries. Or the way they have random sex with people around XD Yeah, especailly that tehe! :) Though i'd like to 'see' more of Kagome going after Sesshomaru, touching him, doing things to him as well, simply cuz I find that to be the most arousing thing ever.  Again, a reader's selfishness ;) I also love how you did Sesshomaru's back story, his absent father and the abusive mother, how he ended up killing his only friend at the time, and how he attacked his mother and then later challenged his father. This gives great insite to his character, a balance of the intensity of youkai emotion with  how he was raised to be, or how he really raised himself to be afterwards. 

As for Inuyasha...well, I'm conflicted. I've never been a fan of his, but I really like the turmoil you've been putting him though, first with Sesshomaru taking Kagome, and then him dealing with the consequence of his actions, as well as him attacking Kagome only to ge this ass kicked. I'm a little conflicted about the 'inbetween sequence', but at the same time, it really gave the story a lot of fleshing out so I really enjoyed that despite my reseved feelings on it. I laughed particularly hard when Inuyasha's father jerked him off while they watched past inupapa have sex with Inuyasha's mother, and the way he treated Sesshomaru's mother, just wow! :D  Tehe, and later to come back to life only to get his ass kicked again by Sango. I really worried about her by the way, simply because the way she spoke of saving Kagome, I worried that she might 'go to war' with Youkai over this, she is clearly not seeing straight. Thank Kami for Miroku right? He's been very honorable :) 

Anyways, enough of my babbling, I look forward to your updates very much! :) Good luck with your Original work as well!!

I think I understand Inuyasha's conflict in this chapter. Someone is offering him a choice. A choice to be human, to not have to struggle every day to control himself, to know peace. Or the choice to be who he is, a hanyou and learn from his mistakes, learn the control that he needs, evolve and become more. It's a daunting thing to be given a choice that will forever change your life. As much as I wish he would take the lessons taught to him in the in-between, I have a feeling that he is going to take the easy way out. He is still to afraid of the demon he houses within, unable or unwilling to trust in others, or ask for their help.

I like that Miroku came back, is offering reason, and is offering this choice. It feels like with the return of Miroku, there has been a small step made on the path to forgiveness. But I don't think true forgiveness can be given unless he can come to terms with himself, both sides of himself.

I can't wait to see what's going on at the Pavillion, and how Kagome's public ascension to Lady of the West goes!

Even with all the stupid things Inuyasha's done, I REALLY feel bad for him. At least, Miroku hasn't abandoned. He is so the voice of reason in all this. That's why I adore him and his perverted ways. Things are interestinger and interestinger with Kagome though. Onward!

i'm kinda annoyed with that boy, not being able to admit that kagome's gone >:l

No no no, Inuyasha, I don't think you get to get off that easily. Not even tonight, his human night, where he is probably in the most pain he has ever been in, does he get to get off that easily. He needs to walk this path of forgiveness, obtain it, then go on to find his own happiness. Wherever it lies. 

I had started to ignore where you had gotten the prompts, but I saw "fwibblewobble" and did not even need to be told that it was a Naq word. XD

Poor Kagome, I bet it was a nerve racking wait til that evening, but I am so proud that she was able to pull it together, that she is learning to rely on Sesshomaru for strength when she needs it. Though I don't think she realizes that yet, but Yoko surely does.

D'aawwwwww! The fluffiness of that damn near sent me into a puddle of fangirl squealing goo. I really do enjoy these little intimate moments between them, where they give one another signs of their deepening caring and affection and trust. Almost as much as I enjoy the smuts, which is saying something, because I do so love smut.

D'aawwwwww! The fluffiness of that damn near sent me into a puddle of fangirl squealing goo. I really do enjoy these little intimate moments between them, where they give one another signs of their deepening caring and affection and trust. Almost as much as I enjoy the smuts, which is saying something, because I do so love smut.