looooove it ...... Keep it up, I absolutely can't wait to see what's next. I'm hooked ;)
I love the way you've written of Sesshoumaru's bewilderment with the present world; the way you've described objects and things from his point of view was so spot on! I especially loved how wary it made him and caused him to think Kagome was a witch. I also love the way Kagome and Sesshoumaru are staying true to character. I enjoyed reading this chapter!:D
A couple of things, though. I'm wondering why Kagome has not found it strange that 1) Sesshoumaru flew her over to the glade of trees in chapter 1, and 2) that he keeps calling her human.
I just read the two chapters up and I just have to say that they were very exciting reads! New concept, excellent writing and fantastic Sesshomaru and Kagome portayals. I can't wait for the updates!
Intriguing! Got so many questions and I am looking forward for answers in chapters to come! ^^
I'm hooked!
I simply enjoyed your wonderfully descriptive style!....and the plot sounds so very very promising. Am really excited about your next chapter.:D
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