Reviews for Illumination by Kanna37

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Kelly (Chapter 2) - Wed 30 Oct 2019

This was another amazing chapter!  The conversations were as compelling as the mating itself.  I felt a little sad for Naraku.  He died feeling he had never been loved.  I was intrigued that Sesshoumaru already had Bakusaiga and his arm back before he took kagome as his mate.  Of course, now I am wondering what else you have in store for this story now that Naraku is dead.  I am hoping for some more contact with Inuyasha, Miroku, and Sango.


Kelly (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Oct 2019

This first chapter is absolutely brilliant!  What a twist to have Naraku be the one to save Kagome!  I loved his dialogue with her, and honestly I could have seen you making a case for the two of them to get together.  The whole bit with him telling her the "truth," and her thoughts about how cold and cruel the truth can be really hit me. I did, however, also appreciate the differences you showed between his desire and "love" for her and Sesshoumaru's.  I am really looking forward to the future interactions between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, now that she is traveling with him.  I am also hoping we will see a lot more regret from Inuyasha.  I don't understand how he justified Kikyou attacking her in the first place.  I wonder what he will say to Miroku and sango now?  Looking forward to reading on!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 6) - Fri 29 Jun 2018

Beautiful story!


333Tenshi (Chapter 6) - Wed 04 Apr 2018

Another amazing story. I really hope you don't stop writing. I'm hoping to get the opportunity to read more of your work.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

Lovely, simply lovely!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

Sorry to get all serious but this chapter was extremely repetitive. Great story and writing skill, you already know that. however when things get repetitive readers tend to lose interest, rush through, or get annoyed. So that's all I would say you have to work on. I kind of wish you were one of my writers you're almost as great as half the staff I deal with. I have enjoyed


Seluna Maru (Chapter 3) - Sun 20 Mar 2016

Wow wow wow. I can be myself and not a strict reviewer (since its kinda my job in real life) this story is epic!!!


Seluna Maru (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Mar 2016

I haven't read this whole chp yet but wow! Just wow! This is an amazing portrayal of Sesshomaru. Typically writers go a little OOC and it hard to not over do it, but this, this was perfectly written. He doesn't seem at all ooc just as one would expect the Lord Maru to act if he had a mate. Only thing I would say about your writing is that its a bit repetitive , one example, the fact that he wants Kagome to stay as is. You stated this already. But besides that this story is fantabulous!! I love love it. I can't tell u how long I have been searching for a good one that I didn't already read. Trust me its hard cause I read alot in the past 7 years ???????? 


DarkR0ze (Chapter 6) - Fri 09 Oct 2015

I love how you incorporated many uncommon words. You must watch your timeline though as you confuse them,  same with some of your tenses. Some words you can further flesh out by using the senses and make them more real.You might want to further edit your whole story and read from the ending first. To avoid making your story look like porn, you shouldn't literally tell what's happening and use figures of speech.

 

 


candace peaches (Chapter 6) - Wed 30 Sep 2015

well written and beautiful. i like the change that came over sesshoumaru, but he still retained the dark side of himself when it came to others and what went on between each character. he was himself infront of kagome and when she wasnt around him. he was able to show kindness where it was due and even though he never said "i love you" he showed it to his family and his mate. i think that counts and shows what he is and what his emotions were capable of. well done. i will look for more of your stories to read. i like them. oh, yeah, the lemons were very well written. c'ya'


MythMagykFae (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 Feb 2015

That ending is just... wow. This isan absolutely wonderful story! 


Liv (Chapter 6) - Thu 18 Dec 2014

This is definitely one of my favorite stories! You did such an amazing job and I hope to see more stories like this from you.


Badtzmaru1907 (Chapter 6) - Sat 13 Dec 2014

Loved this story! I would have preferred this ending than the show or manga ending. Thank you for this ending!


lisa (Chapter 6) - Wed 10 Dec 2014

Absolutely beautiful. I loved the whole thing start to finish. How u fit an entire well thought out story into 6 chapters ill never know but you did it. The flow was perfect til the end and while idve liked to really see the reunion in full detail i understand the frustration of having a story extend itself without ur permission lol. So great job and id like to see mord from u in the future. Min'na ga mite iru!


cherrygirlprime (Chapter 6) - Sun 30 Nov 2014

Beautiful! I am so sad to see it end!


FireDragon (Chapter 6) - Sat 25 Oct 2014

that was great.  I only missed Sesshoumaru courting Kagome.  which is one of my favorite things. I loved all the reflection on the light of Kagome's soul.   glad she rejected the part of her soul Kikio had.  you are one of my favorite authors on this site. I am enjoying reading your stories.


Silence-Midnight (Chapter 6) - Sat 18 Oct 2014

Aw, at the beginnin i felt a little sad for Naraku but Sesshomaru was right.

And i would love to have Yori killed with my own hands!!!!

Such a good story. I really loved it and Sesshomaru had a good idea with the pearl^^

So hope you had fun to write this.

Until next time

Silence-Midnight


DeathDagger (Chapter 6) - Tue 07 Oct 2014

This was a excellent story! Very well written


ironlotus (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 Jun 2014

Really great story!! I loved it I loved it I loved it. Excellent character exploration. Lovely prose. Good work


ironlotus (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 May 2014

Your concept is so refreshingly original and well-written. You are the light that illuminates! Planning on reading this one through start to finish. Excellent opening chapter, especially the latter half. 


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