the funniest part was Kagome hitting Jaken, straight up, the best thing ever when she said he ran off to tattle on her like a little kid, that was hilarious. I saw one mistake, you put excused in the place of accused when Inuyasha was talking afther his little fight with Sesshomaru. I loved this chapter, it was funny and important because Sesshomaru's almost there, once he falls everything will MWUHAHAHAHA, lol.

I can't understand why Sesshoumaru killed Hiten...I certainly had no love for Hiten at any time up to this point in the story, after all he murdered innocent people in order to achieve his goal...but you finally explain the reason the  brothers are seeking revenge, and Sesshoumaru says he'll stay out of it based on demon tradition...and then he goes and gratuitously kills Hiten after it's all over. I can't help but feel sad for what happened to Hiten now despite all of the terrible things he had done earlier in the story.  He already lost his parents and his brother, that should have been punishment enough. And I doubt you intended for us to see Sesshoumaru's actions as kindness by not making Hiten live in a world without his brother.  Also it seems out of character for Sesshoumaru to violate his word, even if he may be able to get around that statement through semantics...

*takes a spatula to Sesshomaru's MOTHER* Bad!!

How's THAT going to be fixed, I wonder?

Thanks for writing!

Lol

Poor Kagome :)

O_O

This is so sad

Oh but you have other apple delicacies just waiting to be consumed, Kagome dear~

Dun-DUN-DUUUUUUUNNNN!

Kagome says: "Oh no she didn't!"

I HAVE BEEN RESSURECTED! ^angelic choir singing^ I am so happy that wasnt the END of the story and the spatula.....I cant. I just cant, but its better than a rolled up paper.....ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a really good chapter, kinda a lighthearted segway into the Other Woman.....I wonder if its Sara, the woman who loved Sesshoumaru, or Kagura or someone else entirely....hmmmm...the possibilities are fairly endless

no......NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS CANT BE THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOu wound me.....you have killed me, I am dead......bleh X_X. But you did an awesome job, there were times when I just wanted to strangle the hell outa Kagome because she was doing the absolute most and not being obediant and listening to reason aka Sesshoumaru. But all in all I really enjoyed this story and I hope you will do a part 2 becaue of the way you left off....just a though *_* <------puppy dog eyes

I agree with other readers, evil cliffhanger! I was hoping that b***h wouldn't show up again, but no, she had to come back. If it's got something to do with Naraku kick his ass, and don't go back to her, if she needed seven or eight years to get over it and not once wrote a letter to her child, she doesn't deserve her. Okay ranting over, again i wanted to cry at the beginning but the ending made me mad as hell.

He grounded you from the computer, huh? haha, probably still mad about the eighty twenty rule. Almost made me cry, poor shippo, i'd be devastated watching my parents die right in front of me. But all of them are gone now, so he doesn't have to worry about the thunder brothers. kagome will take care of him hopefully.

AHHHHH NO THAT WAS THE WORST CLIFF HANGER EVER PLEASE DONT TORTURE ME LIKE THAT I BEG OF YOU!!!

Evil! How could you just leave it there! *taps foot impatiantly* Well...what happens next?!

CORGI?!? CORGI?!? :falls over:

Awesome chapter. Thanks for writing!

LOL, Sesshomaru is anything but a lap dog, haha. That's not how i thought you were going to use electricity but still cool, glad no one fell for that trap. Kagome had better stop tempting him or he'll be getting rid of that virgin priestess status real quick. I'm jealous, i want to be in California! Venice Beach is calling my name but i can't go, have fun.

I dont think so Kagome...

Brilliant!!! i love the so "are you a corgi?" i laughed out loud at that one! can't wait to see his response! hope sangos okay!

I wanna see someone draw a corgi style Sesshomaru...

ahhhh please update soon thats like the biggest cliff hanger ever!!! im gonna die of a need to know what the hell happens

btw awesome story