Wow I loved how how you showed the passion in sessho's eyes. I really hoped it could've been longer.

I loved this! The part with him standing in the dark was amazing! It was all a nice build up to the ending lines between the two. Nicely written and very moving. Great job!!

This was really really good. I liked it. Too bad its only a oneshot. I think it would make a great story line.

Yes I agree that this would've made a great story line. I love they way it was written and how you kind of left the end open a bit. Good job