Absolutely gorgeous! well played!

Put him in his place...lmao!!! Sometimes men need that!! Loved it!

I almost cried when I read this. I wanted to go over there and beat the stupid man up... badly. I wanted to gut him, and use his own blood to draw the picture for him...

and now you made me bloodthirsty. Good job! ^^

I wish to see this continue somehow. 

Are you going to do a response fro Sesshomaru when he finds out she's gone? You may have a good start to a longer story instead.

not really a story so much as just the letter, it would have been intresting if erhaps you wrote a typical day of kagome working for seshomaru or perhaps a number of times where she tried and failed to catch his attention and then she wrote this letter and it would be fantastic if we got sesshomaru's reaction to the letter, hopefully something other than him just rolling his eyes and being annoyed that yet another secretary has fallen in love with him

also, you lose points for the twilight reference, seriously cheesy

nice letter in general, would have liked a story though

I love your story, thank you for writing a story for females that are FRIENDS but overtime want more and can't attain it!