Kirai (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Oct 2011

awwwwww sooooooo cuuuuuttttteeeee! i liked that nice use of the title


Lady Fae (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

loved it! and very well written: it could be easily read, which i appreciate in a good story. keep up the good work!


Ahmee (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

Loved it!


amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Apr 2011

Beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2011

Okay, I have some questions:

1. Didn't he remove the necklace? I would think that would be the first thing he would do since he was assured that she couldn't hurt him. And it's not very loving to keep your mate enslaved.

2. Wouldn't she insist he destroy the slavers and the dark miko? I would expect her to be a little pissed with all of them and want a little of her own back.

3. Wouldn't having the other girls freed and returned to their homes be something she would ask of him - at least as a mating gift?

scent, not sent = smell

Other than that, it was a good story.


TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2011

That was so cute. A nice little one-shot to start the day.


lily (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2011

luv it! but would luv it more if d story was longer and more detailed. but ova all good job


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2011

0o0o0o AWESOME! but there needs MORE!!! BIRDFAY MATING GIFT: slave traders head. i dunno i like it all but the fact that a dark miko got up on kagome, seriosuly that twat needs to have her head taken >:l if Tsubaki couldnt get her i cant see how anyone else could!

 

Off with her head!

more please!

*wiggles c0okies at you*


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