Aww, that was so sweet. I loved how you developed Kagome's personal growth. She went from a clumsy and inept girl to a mature and patient woman. And I liked how you broke it up into drabbles. I think that set up some nice pacing that might have felt rushed in a single oneshot. I thought it was a little arbitrary that Sesshoumaru helped her, but I was sold on how he taught her and their training sessions felt very genuine. And everyone got along, which would be my absolute favorite part. What a lovely story! Thank you for my mod appreciation gift.
amy (Chapter 10) - Tue 05 Apr 2011
Gorgeous story,beautifly written,Thank you!
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