Reviews for The Sacrifice by Reira

Daniella (Chapter 20) - Sun 15 Apr 2018

Keep posting!!!!!

Nelda (Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Nov 2017

Finish this. Please. It's a good story.

AnimeLady04 (Chapter 7) - Wed 28 May 2014

Kagome is very OOC.....She's been lured by false promises before (and even some true promsies and bribes) and she's never faltered. So why would she now? Not trying to flame, just understand

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Thu 12 Sep 2013

Great story, keep it coming.

JanaeGee (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 May 2012

I have two things to say:

I love the plot, very interesting!  Your discriptive writing does pull me in and I love the "deal with a demon" type situation.

Kagome does appear very ooc though, I don't think she would voluntarily kill someone out of her love for Inuyasha and then say that it wouldn't be impossible lol. 

Other than that, I will continue reading because it is a good story. Happy writing!


Lyss (Chapter 12) - Tue 31 Jan 2012

Hm, I feel Kagome is very out of character, but the entire story as a whole is an interesting idea and I look forward to finding out what happens! :) Keep up the good work! :) I'm enjoying it!

criticat (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Sep 2011

Poor Kagome, being Sesshomaru's servant is probably one of the worst jobs in the world lol

Kar (Chapter 8) - Sat 02 Jul 2011

oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job girl, keep up the good work and feeding me more chapters so i can give you more reviews!!!!!

fatcatmom (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

HAH! good one! Please update soon--love to know how Sess sorts this one out with Jaken.... :D

smitten kitten (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

lol poor Kagome, hows she gonna explain this one?

lisa (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Jun 2011


criticat (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

Intriguing :)  More please!

Sesshoumarus Girl (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

Well now this getting very interesting! I can't wait until you update next, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEE!!!!

Sesshoumarus Girl (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

Good story, I cant' wait to see what happens next! Please Please Please UPDATE SOON!!!!

Elle (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Apr 2011

Hmm... It's not like I don't like descriptive writing; it's more to do with how you describe things...

I'm not quite sure how to put it.

Either way, don't look at any of this in a negative light!

Generally, I like your idea and although your story could use a bit of touching up, I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)


Elle (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Mar 2011

Umm... Overall, I like it but I find it a bit overtly descriptive in areas and I dislike purple prose...

Maybe it's just me... :S

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