Reviews for Ever the Lotus by Kanna37

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MinRei (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Jun 2022

Okay so I'm really glad kagome and inuyasha seemed to have a meaningful conversation finally where she didn't just dismiss him the whole time. 

 

But I'm kinda with kagome's mom still. She says that's not the only reason but didn't list a single other quality. 

 

And I'm glad kagome let inuyasha know she won't let Sesshomaru come between them and force them apart. But I'm still deeply uncomfortable with this yandere Sesshomaru that she seems completely oblivious to. 

 

I am still hoping for serious character growth! It's still well written and an interesting premise. Poor inuyasha though. I kinda hope he doesn't mate that inu. He deserves better than an arranged mating. 


MinRei (Chapter 5) - Thu 09 Jun 2022

This is a really good story so far but I'm not gonna lie. I really want to punch this version of Sesshomaru and he's nowhere near worthy of this version of kagome. Who by the way realized inuyasha had reasons for his concerns that she kept brushing off (and he was right in the end) but didn't seem to feel at all bad about how she dismissed him. Her supposed best friend. Not that he was right about everything, but kagome just kinda gaslit him instead of even trying to hear him out.

And Sesshomaru still seems to see her as a possession more than her own person. He knows the kamis made her but has the arrogance and hypocrisy to think they made her for him like he's the center of the universe and then get upset than he's actually her reward. Because it's ok if that's her role but not if it's his. He seems to think he's literally better than the gods. He still thinks he's better than her. He's condescending toward everyone still.

He's usually arrogant (ya know because his actual character is arrogant) but this is beyond the pale honestly. Like I said, it's a good story. It's well written. But damn. I was expecting a lot more character growth. Yes he's had some very minor character growth but VERY minor. Which the story even points out is very minor. He's slow to change and all that. 

Despite her poor treatment of inuyasha, I can see why he's interested in her. She's beautiful, powerful, and educated. But she's also compassionate, kind, loving, forgiving, etc. And in this story she's wise and curious and shares an interest with him and is intelligent. But I can't see why she's attracted to him. He's good looking. That seems to be it. Yes he's powerful and stuff that she doesn't really have an interest in. He's intelligent so that's a plus. But... he doesn't value what she values and hasn't treated her well. Not horribly but not exactly well either. I just. I'm baffled. And really curious to see how the rest plays out. 


Cynthia Sheffield (Chapter 9) - Tue 08 Jun 2021

Oh. This was BEAUTIFUL! ???????? I like it that Inuyasha also had his happy ending. 


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 9) - Fri 15 Feb 2019

Love the story


Faith (Chapter 9) - Tue 28 Aug 2018

I really enjoyed this story. It's so neat how you had certain questions about Kagome and decided to explore them while using the vehicle of Sesshoumaru's curiousity. Your Kagome is slightly less tempestuous and much more confident in who she is and her powers. I liked that because it showed her growth into adulthood in a realistic way. All in all a very interesting & well written story. Thank you for sharing it.


R2A3 (Chapter 9) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

I really enjoyed this story! :) :D

 

 

 


333Tenshi (Chapter 9) - Tue 03 Apr 2018

Perhaps you are a writing God of some sort. Please don't stop.


Natasha (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Feb 2018

wow talk about an intence first chapter =0.0=


Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 May 2017

Kagome's character is strangely nonchalant here. So much that I couldn't finish the story. She said "no big deal" and "I am what I am" too often to be taken seriously. 


Miralith (Chapter 9) - Tue 30 Aug 2016

Wonderfully written!

Again, I was captivated within the first few paragraphs, you are an amazing writer!

I loved the concept of making Kagome something "otherworldly", It really makes this story stand out from most fanfictions.

I can't wait to move onto your next story (I think this time I'm going for Nefarious)!


SairSeir (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Aug 2016

That was a very nice story and well put together. i thoroughly enjoyed it!


Michael Propst (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jun 2016

Omoirikane's shrine is called the miwa shrine and it is one of twelve that is located in Kiryu, Gunma. Hope this helps in the future


DarkR0ze (Chapter 9) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

I liked that it has a a wide range of vocabularies but the way word were used could be used better with better knowledge of the words.

The mating scene is tasteful. Not too much words to go into the detail of the act but enough to know what is happening. Though, in that same vein, the act of how they switch positions is lost and is confusing.

Kagome wa very OOC for my taste at times especially towards the end chapters.


candace peaches (Chapter 9) - Thu 01 Oct 2015

this was one of the BEST stories about sesshoumaru to date. your writing was wonderful. i liked how curious he was about kagome. his curiousity was still there even after he mated her and that was a good thing. im glad inuyasha got a mate of his own and became just as happy as his best friend. i liked how you explained "becoming one" when it came to youkai mating. sometimes i think humans are like that, but only if they have respect for one another. it not if they dont. the lemon was very hot and erotic and well worth the wait. you did good with this story. c'ya'


ruyusaki (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Apr 2015

I LOVED IT SO MUUUUUUUCH!!!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Feb 2015

so freakin' good! I absolutely love overprotective Sess, and his gloating over his kids lol.


Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

This is a great story, it brings them together in such a realistic way compared to many other stories I. Read. 


c plumley (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Nov 2014

Thank you. This was one of the first fanfiction stories that I introduced my self to. I reread the whole story and reenjoyed the whole thing. I loved it when I first read it and I love it now. So once again thank you for finishing it.


DeathDagger (Chapter 9) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

This is the best story I've read in years! And in 9 chapters no less!!!


Saeko (Chapter 9) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

Whooo boy! For a lemon you weren't going to write, you sure made it a long one. And yum! I loved every paragraph of it. ^_^ Also, I really love the way you wrote this story. And in general, I love your writing style. I think I might have seen maybe ONE typo, but even that is not really easily remembered. I'm such a grammar and spelling nazi, and for me to NOT remember that kind of thing is amazing.

The ending is sweet. It's great as a finished piece. I usually like to be able to see how the kids are grown up in these types of stories, but this felt complete. And I love the fact that you made Sess so very much a worrywart when she was pregnant.  

Thumbs up all around. ^_^ 


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