Reviews for Ever the Lotus by Kanna37

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LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 9) - Fri 15 Feb 2019

Love the story


Faith (Chapter 9) - Tue 28 Aug 2018

I really enjoyed this story. It's so neat how you had certain questions about Kagome and decided to explore them while using the vehicle of Sesshoumaru's curiousity. Your Kagome is slightly less tempestuous and much more confident in who she is and her powers. I liked that because it showed her growth into adulthood in a realistic way. All in all a very interesting & well written story. Thank you for sharing it.


R2A3 (Chapter 9) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

I really enjoyed this story! :) :D

 

 

 


333Tenshi (Chapter 9) - Tue 03 Apr 2018

Perhaps you are a writing God of some sort. Please don't stop.


natasha (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Feb 2018

wow talk about an intence first chapter =0.0=


Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 May 2017

Kagome's character is strangely nonchalant here. So much that I couldn't finish the story. She said "no big deal" and "I am what I am" too often to be taken seriously. 


Miralith (Chapter 9) - Tue 30 Aug 2016

Wonderfully written!

Again, I was captivated within the first few paragraphs, you are an amazing writer!

I loved the concept of making Kagome something "otherworldly", It really makes this story stand out from most fanfictions.

I can't wait to move onto your next story (I think this time I'm going for Nefarious)!


SairSeir (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Aug 2016

That was a very nice story and well put together. i thoroughly enjoyed it!


Michael Propst (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Jun 2016

Omoirikane's shrine is called the miwa shrine and it is one of twelve that is located in Kiryu, Gunma. Hope this helps in the future


DarkR0ze (Chapter 9) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

I liked that it has a a wide range of vocabularies but the way word were used could be used better with better knowledge of the words.

The mating scene is tasteful. Not too much words to go into the detail of the act but enough to know what is happening. Though, in that same vein, the act of how they switch positions is lost and is confusing.

Kagome wa very OOC for my taste at times especially towards the end chapters.


candace peaches (Chapter 9) - Thu 01 Oct 2015

this was one of the BEST stories about sesshoumaru to date. your writing was wonderful. i liked how curious he was about kagome. his curiousity was still there even after he mated her and that was a good thing. im glad inuyasha got a mate of his own and became just as happy as his best friend. i liked how you explained "becoming one" when it came to youkai mating. sometimes i think humans are like that, but only if they have respect for one another. it not if they dont. the lemon was very hot and erotic and well worth the wait. you did good with this story. c'ya'


ruyusaki (Chapter 8) - Sat 11 Apr 2015

I LOVED IT SO MUUUUUUUCH!!!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 20 Feb 2015

so freakin' good! I absolutely love overprotective Sess, and his gloating over his kids lol.


Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Jan 2015

This is a great story, it brings them together in such a realistic way compared to many other stories I. Read. 


c plumley (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Nov 2014

Thank you. This was one of the first fanfiction stories that I introduced my self to. I reread the whole story and reenjoyed the whole thing. I loved it when I first read it and I love it now. So once again thank you for finishing it.


DeathDagger (Chapter 9) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

This is the best story I've read in years! And in 9 chapters no less!!!


Saeko (Chapter 9) - Mon 20 Oct 2014

Whooo boy! For a lemon you weren't going to write, you sure made it a long one. And yum! I loved every paragraph of it. ^_^ Also, I really love the way you wrote this story. And in general, I love your writing style. I think I might have seen maybe ONE typo, but even that is not really easily remembered. I'm such a grammar and spelling nazi, and for me to NOT remember that kind of thing is amazing.

The ending is sweet. It's great as a finished piece. I usually like to be able to see how the kids are grown up in these types of stories, but this felt complete. And I love the fact that you made Sess so very much a worrywart when she was pregnant.  

Thumbs up all around. ^_^ 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

This story was awesome, amazing and it had a beautiful ending!


Speed Reader (Chapter 9) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

Interesting take on Kagome, it is different. Once again your stories amaze me!! Loved it and hope to read more amazing stories in the future. Good luck, and may your creativity flow freely without hindrance...


Ankita (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 Oct 2014

*sighs* another  one  of your  stories  is complete happy but gonna miss is and loved tthe  ending ....


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