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Sandreline Moon (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Feb 2011

Oh, you simply MUST continue this!  It was tre adorible!  ^_~  I would love to read more!!!  *^_^*  Brava!

~Sandreline


Oroyukae (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Feb 2011

I really enjoyed your one shot here; it was very entertaining and intriguing as well. The only thing I had an very slight issue with was the use of bold print for the parts where Kagome and Sesshoumaru were speaking in French. The use of bold print, to me, usually indicates the more aggressive emotions like anger and hostility and it can be a bit disconcerting. If I may suggest it, perhaps you could use italics instead? It would be less shocking to the eyes and the reader would not be under the impression that the one speaking if becoming agitated. It is just as suggestion, of course, so please do not be offended.

 

In any case, I really liked this and would like to inquire if there might be a chanve of continuing it? I would so enjoy reading about the 'dynamic duo' holding conversations in such a very beautiful and romantic language. If there was anyyone in feudal Japan that knew how to speak French, it would be our beloved Sesshoumaru. Thank you for this fic, it was very enjoyable! Ciao!

 

Respects,

Oroyukae


FallenTenchi (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Feb 2011

I got to admit I just laugh my head off. Amazing fic and funny tooo - You should give humor a try more often.

BTW French is my first language so if you ever need someone translating it to French, I'll be happy to help you!

FT


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