I like it!!!!! It was awesome!!!!! I wonder... are you going to make a sequel of this?? Or maybe like a prequel to tell your readers what truly happened for Kagome to become Sesshoumaru's mate. Hn, either way it was awesome!!!!
Please do not take the following comment as dissmissive or mean. It is not meant to be:
Despite the sex and graphic detail, this story isn't erotica at all. It is about emotions, intense emotions. And that kind of caught me by surprise.
I liked how you used eye contact and kissing to show the tender side of the physical act of making love. It really fit.
Very well done.
(Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011
Really, really excellently done. Their relationship, the emotion and this scene were intense and carried this through so well..! love. ;u;
(Chapter 1) - Wed 04 May 2011
This was fantastically written!
WHEW and hot, hot, hot. Great job :)
(Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
OMG .... THIS WAS AMAZING ... YOU ARE AN UNBELIVABLE WRITER ... LOVED THE SMUT .. AND I REEEALLLY FELT THE EMOTION ... IT WAS UNBELIVABLE !!
(Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
Whoo hoo! What a story! Loved it!
Oh, this was so melancholy it almost made the lemon seem unimportant. I loved it though, all her emotions on display and a possessive Sesshomaru is always sexy.
Oh ava I love this!
Thank you for finally giving me a real lemon too!!! LOL
I liked it, it is very well written ^_^