Goddamn stupid Kagome. Why be so hung up with that idiot Inuyasha when she has Sesshomaru? SESSHOMARU, ffs! Anyhoo, this was very hot, steamy and well-written. You captured the angst perfectly. Well done.
(Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Sep 2014
I got a message about chapter 3, but there was nothing here when I arrived. Did the interwebz accidentally delete it?
(Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Sep 2014
nice story but it e feel like missing a detail, you get like she has not acceted him completle.. but them i am no writer.. nice work.
This was lovely.
(Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Sep 2014
I've read and enjoyed many of your stories, but this is my first review. I enjoy your writing style and find your ideas compelling and enjoyanle. I really like the whole idea behind Makeshift Life. I was suprised to see you had added to it, and pleased. It stands well as it is, but I would still love to see how Kagome moves from resignation to acceptance and maybe one day contentment.
It would be wonderful if you did a few more chapters. Showing her accepting him slowly and giving up Inuyasha. This was lovely. Thanks.
That was just WOW! What else is there to say.
im going to say this now DAMN THAT IS HOT !!!!
(Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014
It's nice to see Kagome slowly moving from basic acceptance towards contentment and love - and Sesshomaru having the patience to open up to her and help her get there.
If you do ever add, it would be wonderful to have a chapter showing Kagome's full acceptance and love for Sesshomaru. This second chapter also got me wondering how she ended up with Sesshomaru in the first place.
Wow! This is hot! I like it!
Thank you :)
I was afraid this would be too sad. Boy, was I wrong. Sensual and sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you!
wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Jan 2012
Wow! Words escape me. Wow!
Look forward to reading more of your works. This one fic has made me a devoted follower. Wow! I am speechless. :)
I like it!!!!! It was awesome!!!!! I wonder... are you going to make a sequel of this?? Or maybe like a prequel to tell your readers what truly happened for Kagome to become Sesshoumaru's mate. Hn, either way it was awesome!!!!
Please do not take the following comment as dissmissive or mean. It is not meant to be:
Despite the sex and graphic detail, this story isn't erotica at all. It is about emotions, intense emotions. And that kind of caught me by surprise.
I liked how you used eye contact and kissing to show the tender side of the physical act of making love. It really fit.
Very well done.
(Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011
Really, really excellently done. Their relationship, the emotion and this scene were intense and carried this through so well..! love. ;u;
(Chapter 1) - Wed 04 May 2011
This was fantastically written!
WHEW and hot, hot, hot. Great job :)
(Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
OMG .... THIS WAS AMAZING ... YOU ARE AN UNBELIVABLE WRITER ... LOVED THE SMUT .. AND I REEEALLLY FELT THE EMOTION ... IT WAS UNBELIVABLE !!
(Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2011
Whoo hoo! What a story! Loved it!
Oh, this was so melancholy it almost made the lemon seem unimportant. I loved it though, all her emotions on display and a possessive Sesshomaru is always sexy.
Oh ava I love this!
Thank you for finally giving me a real lemon too!!! LOL
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