Reviews for Makeshift Life by Avadrea

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Raynell (Chapter 2) - Fri 04 Sep 2015

Goddamn stupid Kagome. Why be so hung up with that idiot Inuyasha when she has Sesshomaru? SESSHOMARU, ffs! Anyhoo, this was very hot, steamy and well-written. You captured the angst perfectly. Well done.

Nicole (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

I got a message about chapter 3, but there was nothing here when I arrived. Did the interwebz accidentally delete it?

marisel (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Sep 2014

nice story but it e feel like missing a detail, you get like she has not acceted him completle..   but them  i am no writer..  nice work.

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Sep 2014

This was lovely.

Eva (Chapter 2) - Sat 06 Sep 2014

I've read and enjoyed many of your stories, but this is my first review. I enjoy your writing style and find your ideas compelling and enjoyanle. I really like the whole idea behind Makeshift Life. I was suprised to see you had added to it, and pleased. It stands well as it is, but I would still love to see how Kagome moves from resignation to acceptance and maybe one day contentment. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

It would be wonderful if you did a few more chapters. Showing her accepting him slowly and giving up Inuyasha. This was lovely. Thanks.

KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

That was just WOW! What else is there to say.

SilverInu93 (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

im going to say this now  DAMN THAT IS HOT !!!!

Nicole (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Sep 2014

It's nice to see Kagome slowly moving from basic acceptance towards contentment and love - and Sesshomaru having the patience to open up to her and help her get there. 

If you do ever add, it would be wonderful to have a chapter showing Kagome's full acceptance and love for Sesshomaru. This second chapter also got me wondering how she ended up with Sesshomaru in the first place. 

Wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Apr 2012

Wow!  This is hot!  I like it!

Thank you :)

henandchicks (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Jan 2012

I was afraid this would be too sad.  Boy, was I wrong.  Sensual and sweet.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.  Thank you!

wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Jan 2012

Wow!  Words escape me.  Wow!

Look forward to reading more of your works.  This one fic has made me a devoted follower.  Wow!  I am speechless.  :)

Akitomi Vampiress Queen (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Sep 2011

I like it!!!!! It was awesome!!!!! I wonder... are you going to make a sequel of this?? Or maybe like a prequel to tell your readers what truly happened for Kagome to become Sesshoumaru's mate. Hn, either way it was awesome!!!!

The Lady W (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 Jun 2011

Please do not take the following comment as dissmissive or mean. It is not meant to be:

Despite the sex and graphic detail, this story isn't erotica at all. It is about emotions, intense emotions. And that kind of caught me by surprise.

I liked how you used eye contact and kissing to show the tender side of the physical act of making love. It really fit.

Very well done.

Ejunkie (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011

Really, really excellently done. Their relationship, the emotion and this scene were intense and carried this through so well..! love. ;u;

Kamiki (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 May 2011

This was fantastically written!
WHEW and hot, hot, hot.  Great job :)

karrina (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011


Cherry (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Feb 2011

Whoo hoo! What a story! Loved it!

randomfan17 (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Feb 2011

Oh, this was so melancholy it almost made the lemon seem unimportant. I loved it though, all her emotions on display and a possessive Sesshomaru is always sexy.

Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 1) - Tue 01 Feb 2011

Oh ava I love this!

Thank you for finally giving me a real lemon too!!! LOL

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