Reviews for Plushie Picnic by hola

Mallory (Chapter 2) - Wed 26 Jan 2011

I like Rin in this chapter, she is kinda stealing the show with her stuffed animal's adventures and of course JAken is always ridiculous!


Mallory (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Jan 2011

I really like this, it's cute and short! The only problem is you said 'smile grace Kagome's face' when it should probably be 'smile graced Kagome's face'

Just a small mistake, I find it helps to read your stories out loud before you post them, it helps to hear it


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