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Boo-chan (Chapter 11) - Wed 16 May 2012

I liked it! Maybe you could be persuaded to make another story similar but with much more plot beyond the smut. Not that I mind in any way, shape, or form


Rose Haven (Chapter 11) - Tue 21 Jun 2011

 

I belive i read this somwhere else but still i do love it !!!!!!!


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 11) - Mon 11 Apr 2011

Wow, your story is so steamy I could brew tea with it.  I absolutely love it!  Your story was well written, lemony and just plain great. 


Avy (Chapter 11) - Wed 23 Mar 2011

Heidlebergchick (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Feb 2011

What an exciting idea for a story. I can see though why you would have used it as a one shot, but wanting to know how the whole heat week played out is probably the reason it got longer, am I right? either way I'm happy and i loved it. I think Sesshoumaru was pleasently surprised and im happy that Kagome came to have fun as well. thanks for this.


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 11) - Thu 27 Jan 2011

Heck ya, I enjoyed it...  and I found it quite funny in places too.

Awesome job.

 


Christine (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Jan 2011

I thought that was wonderful. It was sensual and so erotic yet had no trace of vulgarity about it.  I liked the way you included what each of them was thinking and feeling, not just describing the physical action. It was about as perfect as it could be. Thank you for entertaining me so wonderfully.


lara (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

Oh that sucks that this will be the last chapter of this story. I wanted to know if her life is extended now that she is mated to him ...he never said & she never asked. You also left out if her marking him worked. I also would have love to have read more of what happened between them when they arrived at his/their fortress/home & when they continue the hunt how everyone will take it now that Sessh & Kagome are mated. I was surprised that both Shippo & Sango seemed angry with her as they left & I would have liked to have seen how it was resolved. I'd expect Shippo to be happy for her because she is his adopted Mother & this now would give him a new family with a powerful father & a sister he is already friends with....plus if her life is now extended by mating Sessh then he would not have to worry about her dying of old age while he's still so young making it so that he would have his adopted mother for possibly as long as he lives. I would have also thought that both Shippo & Sango would be happy for Kagome just knowing that she was happy because she is so important to them & they've watched her be hurt by Inuyasha's words & actions for so long & knowing Sessh the way they do although not on friendly terms yet they know he is honorable & very protective of what he considers to be his or under his protection.....& his behavior although shocking & unexpected to both of them with Shippo's knowledge as a youkai & Sango's knowledge as a demon hunter they know that he was very vocal & adamant that he was letting it be known to all that he claimed her as his own & that she was now his Mate........they both also should know he is not one to do something like  taking on a Mate for life unless he truly wanted her & not as a form of vengeance against Inuyasha or any other reason other than his being serious about her .

           Oh yes I would love to read more of this story


1CarinoInu (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

Aww, so dissappointed that it's come to an end, but very satisfied with the outcome.  I'm so glad that the battle for dominance was simple and noone had to die.  Even Kouga got a clue for once, and he's usually portrayed as a little more on the hard-headed side.  I liked how the transitioning word for Inuyasha was Kagome calling Sesshomaru her 'mate.'  It made it a little more real to him that she was lost to him as a potential mate.

Really well done.  I'll have to re-read again, just for the lemony goodness!!


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

One of the best stories I have read so far!


randomfan17 (Chapter 11) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

Oh wow, Inuyasha needs to have his butt kicked a little more often to get things through his head. That would have been so embarrasing, all m friends watching me kiss someone they thought i disliked, i can get Kagome's reaction. I loved this chapter, please say there's more.


joyouki (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

OMG that was so juicy!!!!I love lemons!!!lol


randomfan17 (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Jan 2011

I love this story! just another lemon my ***, this is an awesome story, of course i'm praising all the lemons as well but i love it and it's little mini plot in the backgroung. Can't wait to see the next chapter.


lara (Chapter 10) - Thu 20 Jan 2011

Oh this was amazing I can't believe you updated so many chaps at one time but I am damn glad you did. I can only imagine what will happen next when Kouga gets to Edo & tells Inuyasha & the gang what he found out. I do believe, as I read in one of these stories recently, that Inuyasha would birth a kitten upon hearing that Sessh & Kagome were together for sex. The funny thing is that he/they believe that at the worst, she is with him against her will & that he would only take Kagome specifically because he must have been in a lust induced heat at the time he came across her & at best ,they think it's sex only because of his heat & that either way they believe that once they get there that they'll be saving her & she will leave with them willingly & grateful.      

 They have no idea what they are about to really find when they get there. There is the chance that one or more of them sensed her use the well either when she went home or when she returned ...or that one or more of them sensed Sessh when he took her to the well to drop her off or pick her up. There is also the chance that Miroku discussed with Sango,Kaede or Shippo the state of both Kagome & Sessh when they came for her stuff....aside from that as astute as Miroku & Kaede (& at times Shippo) is at times they may have been wondering something for awhile trying to put together Sessh's constant ability to be in the right place at the right time to save Kagome so often,along with the glances between the 2 that they thought nobody noticed plus Kaede knows of Kagome healing Sessh's arm & Miroku may have figured that out as he can usually detect Kagome's power. I also wouldn't be surprised if Shippo & Rin have always wanted Kagome & Sessh together for many reasons.....like the 2 of them wanting to have real parents & be family,Shippo would probably see Sessh as a more honorable youkai who would treat Kagome with the respect she deserves & not disrespectfully like Inuyasha,Rin feeling that Sessh is lonely & that Kagome is both a loving person & a perfect mother figure.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh yeah is Sessh going to tell her that he knows it was her who healed his arm ???

I was also wondering if Sessh's mark will increase Kagome's lifespan & healing ability & if Kagome's mark worked & stayed on Sessh & if it will protect him from holy power.


darkkurai (Chapter 10) - Thu 20 Jan 2011

woot another great chapter! :)i really love it! im glad they talked some about he past and are now on the same page! hehehe i cant wait to see if she gets "pupped" from all the sexy. I also look farword to see how everyone takes the mateing when the find out. i hope this story as a lot more to go! (for i never want it to end it so so good!) i am looking farward to your next update!


Miss.Undo (Chapter 9) - Tue 18 Jan 2011
Ahhhhhhhhhhh I cant wait for that update! ")

1CarinoInu (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 Jan 2011

*sniff* so beautiful!  That was really lovely!  Very well done.  Thank you for sharing.  I can't wait to see what trouble that wolf will bring back with him.


darkkurai (Chapter 9) - Sun 16 Jan 2011

WoW this is an amazing story! i love how there is a lot of sex but there is still a story line kinda of. I really hope there will be lots more to read! you have a lot of talent! i look forward to reading more of your work!


lara (Chapter 3) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

this is the best...I wonder if he knows that it was her who healed his arm....since she denied it & he can smell when someone is lying & she isn't a good liar. I also wonder if it will come up as to why he wasn't in his 3rd or 4th day of heat & just out of control when he got to her,will she figure out that his heat isn't for 8 days.... I could see her telling him that she learned about demon heat cycles from Sango & asking him why his lasts for 8 days or more when Sango said they last 5-7 days.....or if he'll ask how she found about demon heat cycles......I wonder if she'll say anything to him,because she feels guilty that he got stuck with her for his heat cycle, about him having to suffer being in heat for days only to end up being stuck with her after not being able to find or get to his chosen partner in time & end up admitting to him either her attraction to him or her want of him & then in trying to make herself feel better, tell him it may turn out that its a heat he'll regret & want to forget that he'd been with her ,but she's actually glad that she got to lose her virginity to him.

will she ask him why his heat lasts for over a week? you still have to explain why he took her ? why he saved her from the oni's that had taken her &  how he found her ?? did he just so happen to smell her & decided to save her for the hell of it??? was it because he figured out that she had returned his arm & wanted to repay her & if so then why did he save her before ??? why does he think of her as his ??? is he really in heat right now or using as an excuse  to keep her for a week & have his way with her because she had brought it up ?? ...........but that still doesn't explain why he considers her to be his & says she just doesn't know it yet??? has he always wanted her or just wanted her for awhile???? did he start to go into heat a day before he found her while he was on his way to someone else ?? or did he start his heat cycle while trying to find her &  had already been looking for her for      days ?            

there is also the fact that we know he really wasn't lost in his heat lust because his eyes did become  normal ambur when she wasn't looking before she said she was willing & she wouldn't fight him she just wanted him to try to be gentle.

then there is also the fact that once satiated after coming one time his sanity & lust was in control enough for him to  wake up after a nap completely sane & normal...all amber eyed & rational enough to dress them & then listen to her & discuss her desire to be taken to her friends so she could give them an excuse & get some supplies & after listening to her rational agreeing to carry her on his back while they discussed his heat & her wish to stay with him for a week while he smiled & agreed & then took her to confront her friends & his bro,give the monk a dirty look & come back after listening to her get ready & get her belongings & pick her up physically & make fun of her pulled muscle excuse while he carried her to a nice clean cave before continuing his desire which had since become their 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The only reason we have to believe that he was taking her because he was in heat was her reasoning that since saving her from the oni's he then was red eyed holding her against a tree with an open desire for her & what she doesn't know because she closed her eyes while thinking to herself,was that his eyes had become amber, until she told him verbally he could have his way with her & she wouldn't fight him,he then smiled which she also didn't see. If he had been looking for her because he did desire her for a while & was always trying to keep her safe without her knowledge,until the time he could take her as his own,we don't know because all we know is what he shows or says when he appears & acts out in front of his brother,usually in anger with his cold,emotionless mask on. We do know that everyone has feelings,thoughts & desires & the truth in life is we never really know what is going on in someone elses mind. We also can safely say that Sessh is intelligent, strong & disciplined enough to show only what he wants & that if he ever really wanted to kill Inuyasha he  could & would. Hell,he could've killed him while he hung from a tree helplessly asleep for 50yrs. He allowed him to keep the sword when he saw that it sealed his demon blood & kept him sane & even had it taken to him once before he could lose himself & his mind completely.

 I can't wait to see where this story takes us next & what is really going on in your story's Sessh's mind. I hope you update this story with another chapter.......soon.

I love it


amy (Chapter 4) - Sat 15 Jan 2011

YOU DID IT AGAIN! MORE, MORE!


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