that reminds me of the scary story were the boyfriend comes back and takes the girl out for a ride and she gives him her scarf cause she thinks he's cold but when she gets home her father tells her that he died a week ago or something and when they dig up the body he is wearing her scarf! I dont know why it reminds me of that maybe the motorcyle thing. . .
You know, sure this story is pretty romantic in that tragic sort of way. Nevermind that this same story, based off that internet tale has been done already. I really wish people would realize that first, any good motorcyclist knows to check his bike before heading out. Second, when you're going fast, you can't hear what the other person is saying. And third, the moment you let go of the throttle on a bike, its speed drops drastically. If you keep the bike steady, you'll be able to stop. It's not like a car at all.
The story is cute and your writing is descriptive, but please do a bit of research.
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