Reviews for Slavery by Marulover

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Sunset Senshi (Chapter 6) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

I've waited for this story for so long it was a treat to be able to read two great chapters , I'm waiting patiently for the next one . It's got me so excited . I'm only hoping Sesshomaru wasn't sold back in to slavery somehow and that he regained his lands again ALSO that Naraku gets a taste of his own medicine ! The kikyo part was kind of sad but the b-word desserved it definitely !


luv u so much (Chapter 6) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

aHHHHHHHHH@ ! Don't do that!!! Don't leave it so! :)

 

PLS continue soon!


lara (Chapter 6) - Wed 19 Jan 2011

Okay I'm going to die if you don't update this soon. I have to know if he came back because he was caught again or of his own free will because he wanted to be with her,see her ,tell her he loved her or ask if she loved him or would want to be with him. When you say there was a commotion & Sessh is at the gate with 2 men on either side of him it almost sounds as if he was caught again.....when I think of how angry her father was when she told him that she freed him & her father said 'how could you do that to me?' & then her father left. It makes me worry that he sent people after her. I also wonder if it's going to come out that the other slave..I thinks it's kikyo's main whore slave is Inuyasha the brother that Sessh was searching for & if so maybe he isn't there for Kagome but to retreive his brother,,,

       Please update soon so we can find out what will happen. I want Sessh & Kagome to be together but other than the fact that they both have strong feelings  for each other but have never shown them to each other or told each other...I think at this point it seems Kagome loves him but thinks she knows for sure that he wants nothing to do with her & believes that he only kissed her because she asked him even though he was free she took it like it was his way of saying thank you for setting him free. I have no idea if Sessh knows how she feels for him but I recall him thinking that since he'd been basically a sex slave for all these years that he thought of her as being to pure to be touched by someone such as him,I mean you would think with the way she treated him as an equeal & never as a slave & with the way she treated him with respect that he would understand & with his intelligence he'd be able to see thru the little things she had said like slight hints from a girl with no experience with males or how to woo them in a cunning way as an experienced or sleazy woman (like Kikyo) ,,,,you'd think he'd be able to see that she genuinely liked him for the man he was &  that he'd be able to figure out that He was the one she loved.

 That was why even though she was supposed to use him to learn about sex she didn't,couldn't & wouldn't ask that of him because to her she never saw him as a slave or just a man . To her He was much more than that & she only wanted him to touch her if that was what he wanted from her as a woman he had feelings for or loved & was attracted to. She couldn't bear the thought of him touching her intimately because he was ordered to or he had to be cause he didn't have a choice. She wanted him to want her the way she wanted him.   ( like her one hint about wanting to wear the dress for him ...her anger over Kikyo going after him as a sex toy& etc...) 


Lyssie (Chapter 6) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Oooooh a cliff hanger!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!


Tsuki (Chapter 6) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Great Chapter! Update again soon!


Niiroroze (Chapter 6) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Awesome! You gave such depth to the characters it was easy to lose myself in the story. I cannot wait for the next chapter!


Bori-Gomaru (Chapter 6) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

OHH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON ITS REALLY GOOD!


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 6) - Tue 18 Jan 2011

Oh! Not a kind place to stop! Please update soon!!! XD

Have a wonderful week!

~~Mizuko~~


lara (Chapter 5) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

please tell me that they end up together...free but together...I'm almost afraid of reading anymore. I feel like these 2 will never be honest with each other over their feelings & never end up together

    It's making me nervous


Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

There are very few stories that touch my heart and this is one of them thta tugs at the heart strings. I cant wait to see what happens next. The is so much more that can happen especially because of Naraku.


luv u somuch (Chapter 5) - Mon 03 Jan 2011

luuuuuuuuuv it!   luuuuuuuv u!!!!!!!! please continue soon! <3


Lavender (Chapter 5) - Sun 02 Jan 2011

I really like this story! I like how you came up with the whole slave idea and how Kags treats him. Please update soon!

Keep it up!

-LavB


lara (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Dec 2010

oh please tell me you will update this soon & find away for Kagome to tell him her real feelings for him & how she wants nothing to do with this Naraku ,she fears him & wishes to run away. I hope she & Sessh to run away together & admit they love each other.otherwise I'm starting to panic that Kikyo will take Sessh or Kagome will end up with Naraku. Can't kikyo see naraku & fall in love with him instead. I'm getting nervous that these 2 will never share there feelings & this will be a sad cruel tale.....but I keep telling myself this is a Sessh & Kagome site  so it can't end up horrible & sad....but I'm so unsure.


MoxyMikki (Chapter 4) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

The innocent yet intimant moments between Sesshomaru and Kagome are beautifully portrayed. A few of them had me getting glassy eyed! I really appreciate Kagome's determination to set Sesshomaru free, and I can't wait to see when and how that will happen. I'm also on the edge of my seat with the new arrival of Kikyo's mayhem and Naraku's mischief! Please keep writing - I can't wait for another updated!


Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Sun 26 Dec 2010

I really hope that Kikyo gets hers in this. I cant wait to see and read more.


Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

Moreeee please! :D


0okagomeo0 (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Dec 2010
omg omg its ur story is so great i have read all of the story till u stoped updateing it i have been dieing 2 know what happens in the story i hope u still keep it the same i love it alot i remember reading it and thinking its great with neraku and stuff i wont say more lol dont want 2 give it away 2 the new readers o i do hope u can finish this story this time ive been so in love with it =) i will be watching for ur updates thanx for bringing this story back im a big fan plz update soon

amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Dec 2010

PLEASE CONTINUE!


lara (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Dec 2010

Hello-

 Just read this story today & I must say I enjoyed it very much & I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I really want Kagome & Sessh to end up together & where you left it off.....I was almost ready to cry..... I'm so nervous now. I wish they would talk to each other about what they are each feeling so they would understand each other .I felt so bad for her when he left the bath & said I can't do this, she was so hurt because she thought he left the bath because he thought  she wasn't attractive. They might be able to help each other if they only communicated with each other.  I'm a little confused because I thought the collar would allow him to know what she was feeling...like in the beginning when she gave blood to the collar & she put it on him &  he touched her hand & when he let go her hand felt cold &  then suddenly got warm & her father said it was alright & that they were now bound to each other & he would be able to feel her emotions.....you haven't shown any of that yet & I'm looking forward to that, she must be very upset finding out she is betrothed & she saw Sessh react to the name so I hope as soon as they leave her mothers room they go to her room because she'll either be in shock or crying.I'm pretty sure she realizes she only wants Sessh & I think we know how he feels about her ...... I want them to touch in some way (like when he didn't know it was her & she was missing from bed & he followed the person around & when they were going to the castle he pushed her into the wall & felt pain in his own shoulder & realized the only way he could feel the pain if the hooded person was her) if he he tries to hug her or hold her to calm her down.....wouldn't he then know how she feels for him & how she only wants him but is afraid that he doesn't like her since that bath thing. After leaving her mothers room I could see her asking him if he would like his freedom & if he asks why she could say because she doesn't feel like she belongs in this castle doing what they want her to & she refuses to marry this person since the only man she feels for is him & if she does admit her feelings for him she'll probably tell him that she knows he's only with her because of the slave thing even though she never wanted a slave & she has told him she sees him as an equal & she knows most women have sex with their slaves but when he ran out of the bath that day she knew that even as her slave he didn't want to touch her or have sex with her so since she would rather run away before this betrothal thing she would rather run herself & give him his freedom so he's not punished & he can have his own life. Those were some of the ways I was thinking to get them together.

         I really enjoyed this story & I really hope you write more, I can barely wait to see what will happen next & what will develop between Sessh & Kagome. I'll be waiting everyday to see if you write more.

          Thank you


Rodneya (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Dec 2010

OMFG U HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!


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