This is a really good story.  It is a shame that you might not be finnishing this.  It has a lot of potential and good strong characters.  Maybe you will take it as far as Kagome seeing that some of them are still alive and can be a part of her life.  We will see.  Good Job.  Deb

This is obviously not complete but its marked as complete! please fix that! other than that, this story is really good && i hope you update soon!

:) please update soon!

I really enjoyed this first chapter. I enjoyed it so much that I think I will stop here :) Thanks.

still amazing, but very sad. is this the end?

absolutely fantastic! it is lovely!

FAntastic.  Another awesome chapter.  Your desire to show them as best friends worked very well.  Though it almost seemed like more.  Like Denee was interested in Kag for more than just friend, but never pushed her so hard that she had to reject her.

Still.  Very good.  I loved it.

0o0o0o0o this was nice! so she remembers i wonder what he's going to be thinking now, it's obvious he thought she had just gotten over them all but he can clearly see thats not the case, so i wonder now, if he'll pump her for info, and how he'll tell her that he's her Sesshomaru and not just this Kin person she's been falling for.

:D

Another great chapter.  I am sorry I don't have anything better to say, such as a critique of the work and any advise...  I just love it.  XD

Yes I liked it!!  I'd be crazy not to!

I'm so excited about your story.  I cannot wait to see where it is going, Most people say it's not the destination, but the journey.  I want to destination.

*acting like a kid in the back seat* "Are we there yet?  Are we there yet?....Are we there yet?

I am sorry.  I don't have any suggestions.  I like what is happening so far, but for the most part, the stories sometimes tell themselves.  XD

I look forward to the next chapter when you get to it.  Good luck with reality.  It can be a pain.  :D

it's a good update! i really like it, though now i'm wondering, they had something going on before she left the Feudal era? 0o0o0o0o0o more please!

Anxiously awaiting your next update! Lol

Haha! I'm pretty sure Sesshoumaru WAS staring at her ass! Great chapter! I wonder how much longer until she realizes who he really is....

awesome.  :D

I love it.

evil tiny print but very very cute!

An apostrophe  [ ' ] is used to create possessive forms, contractions, and some plurals. The apostrophe shows where a letter or letters have been left out of a contracted verb. It subtracts greatly from your -great- story when misused it show spoken language -it really doesn't bother me when used to show internal babble.

Please use quotation marks [ " "] to set off material that represents quoted or spoken language.

I liked. Short and sweet. Nice.

A helpful Sesshoumaru--wonderful!

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