Reviews for All Fall Down by Phoenix89

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KyraTekak (Chapter 6) - Thu 26 Aug 2021

Awesome story so far 


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Feb 2018

aw, another one amazing work and not finished!

you really do have talent!

my compliments.

still hoping you will return...


Marisela (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Aug 2012

love it cant wait for the rest of the chapters!!!!!!! and see what happens to the lord of an ass does! and see if he gets purified!!!!


Michaela (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jun 2012
*omq!!! HAFTA loike update soon!! The story's very compellin*

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 6) - Thu 22 Dec 2011

I must admit, after reading your holiday drabble series, I poked through the rest of your stories.  I SOOOOOO hope you haven't lost interest in this one!  I remember reading it before and being quite intrigued with the premise and the development.  Hopefully, at some point, you will revist this and maybe update??  I'll fave it anyway, and keep my fingers crossed!

:D

~~Wiccan~~


mika (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

Okay, it's clear now. I love your story. =)


mika (Chapter 2) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

I really like your story. Your plot is so different than others I have read before. It makes me excited and hopeful. I can't wait to see what happens next.


sara (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

You are constantly switching Kagome´s eye color from blue to hazel and it gets annoying. Please just pick one finally and stay with it!


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Mar 2011

Oooh that was awesome!  I'm so glad you updated ^_^ Man what an action packed chapter!  Really well done.  Ugh, when he slit Yumi's throat, I got completely tense.  I jus tloved this chapter.  It was very thrilling and it definitely seems like a turning point in the sotry.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Thank you and keep up the good work!


BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 4) - Tue 30 Nov 2010

I really like the new twist you have given to this pairing. Sometimes I get tired of the same old feudal era romance. I can't wait to see where you take the story. 


NA (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

I don't know how you did it, but tis story manages to be oober sad and oober awesome at the same time. Update PLEASE!!!!


TheMikoShivae (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

love the story so far....

 

my only gripe is you keep switching back and forth between her having blue eyes.. and hazel eyes.. sometimes in the same chapter.... 

 

i understand the whole thing about different names and such.. so you do not need to feel that you didn't explain that well enough or anything..

 

and i know that all the other vessels that were not the "true" Kagome had the natural eyes.. can't remember if they were brown or hazel...  but i think that's what confuses me the most..  is the "true" kagome that you keep talking about just keeps changing eye colors.. from blue in some chapters.. to hazel in others.. and either this chapter or the one before has it starting blue.. and going to hazel like.. midway through the chapter... 

 

that is my only gripe *nods*  keep up the great work :)


InuLover (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

Ah, I forgot to mention in my last review...I was wondering when Inuyasha was going to make an appearance?  I thought it was going to be in this chapter?  I can't wait to see what his reaction to Kagome will be.  Anyhoo, update soon, pls!  :D


InuLover (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Nov 2010

Sorry for not reviewing prior to this, but I couldn't seem to stop reading.  Which means, I love this story.  The concept is so unique that it has really piqued my interest.  So many questions, too.  Like the different last names of Kagome, and yet the same soul?  Her circumstances seem to be different too, although she has a brother named Souta, as did the feudal Kagome.  But no shrine, or grandfather, or well?  Hmmm..

Also, I can't help wondering if Naraku was destroyed, or did he kill the feudal Kagome, before he could be killed by her?  And, is this Lord Zenaku of the Eastern Lands possibly Naraku, or a re-incarnation of Naruku?  He did tell Kagome, in her dream, that she couldn't escape him.  At least, I'm assuming it's Naraku.  I could be wrong, but someone from the feudal era is still around wanting to finish off Kagome.

Anyhoo, can't wait for the next chapter.  Hope more will be revealed then!  Keep up the good work.  :D


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

Another cliffhanger?  You're evil. That was a good chapter.  I wonder how Kagome's going to get out of this.  Would a barrier protect them from a fire?  Hmm....I guess i'll have to wait and see.  Keep up the good work!


Silverwing (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

This story is so well written! It is a joy to read and the plot is super fun! Is Kagome going to get her memories of a former life back? How did the timeline split so that a Kagome could live in the past and the present? I know they have different last names but the same soul? Interesting...


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

Hmm.  This is very interesting.  I have to say this is pretty unique so far, I haven't read a story quite like it.  I'm definitely curious as to how this came about.  What happened to Kagome Higurashi to make it so she would have to be reincarnated?  If her and Sesshoumaru fell in love in the past and mated, then what happened (I'm assuming something like this happened since Shippo and Rin view her as a mother)?  Did she die in battle, illness?  What?  You've done a good job engaging my curiousity, hehe.  Although I am slightly confused by the birth certificate of Kagome Yamasaki and Kagome Higuarshi.  If they were born at the same time, then how can Yamasaki be Kagome's reincarnation?  Or is it some kind of freaky parallel existence cooked up by the Gods? Very, very interesting.  I can't wait to see how this is all going to play out.  I hope the past is explained.  I have a feeling that this story could be very epic.  Good luck to you and keep up the good work!


Silverwing (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Oct 2010

This story has a really interesting concept! I am very excited to learn why Kagome passed on (was it an accident? Rin is alive so it can't be because she is human if she was Sesshoumaru's mate). Thank you for writing this; it seems like ti will be awesome!


NanashiTenshi (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Oct 2010
love it so far, can't wait for more!

Kristin (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

I truly adore this story so far! The concept is somthing I haven't heard of before and is a refreshing change! Update soon!


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