Well dang. Obviously we need to understand why His Hotness needs to rob pawn stores. Is he looking for the ring, thinking Kagome pawned it in anger? We need to know who the blond Neko was...(a rare humanoid Kilala? so odd...)
A crime ring? Sess and Yasha are members of a Yakuza family?
I don't know. Haven't read any other reviews. Good luck!
ilenoir (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Oct 2010
Please contiune!!!
it was getting so good you gotta make longer chapters no sex sences yet it's will make the story cheesey is my option
Darkanjel (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Oct 2010
This was LOVELY!!
Keep it goin!! :D
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