Perfectly portrayed. Made me smile from start to finish. I think it epitomised all men when they are just sick enough to turn into complete babies. Reminds me of my dad needing a peppermint hand delivered to his mouth by my mother after he'd obliged and so "bravely" taken the medicine. I loved your style in all it's facets. Your writing was lovely and descriptive and I loved the fact you used qite a few unusual words. I enjoyed it a lot, thankyou for penning such a smile maker.

Yah... my dad used to lay on the couch and whine when he'd get sick that he needed his 'sick cream' in order to get better.  'Sick cream' being vanilla ice cream swirled with orange sherbert.  And he'd whine and moan until he got it, too.  I miss my dad...  :(

Amber

Teehee. Sessho fussing over a little medicine.. the puppy :p reallly cute though

Wow this is fabulous! Totally hilarious and heart warming. Loved it!

-LavB

Haha that was awesome :)

Good job!! *hands you a cookie* :D