~~Oh please please please continue this story! It's so refreshing to see a modern twist like this where the characters are realistic...I was so disappointed when it suddenly ended! :(
Well, girl, I will take what I can get of your writting. *Sits on pile of hoarded unfinished Ashley stories* After all, beggars can't be choosers. And this story sounds intriguing already. I see you survived basic... I hope you're going for to be a fighter pilot! 
      
Tsuki (Chapter 2) -  Sun 03 Oct 2010 
Yay :) You updated!! 
But you really should make your chapters longer :O Bc this is a really good story and Bc the rules state chapter stories need a minimum of 700 words. :) 
Keep up the good work!!!! 
      
Tsuki (Chapter 1) -  Sun 03 Oct 2010 
Great start! I think this is going to be an awesome story! 
Keep up the good work and update soon! :D 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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