Freya Ishtar (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Dec 2010

I really enjoyed this, eloquent and a hint chilling.


>_> though I have a hard time picturing Jaken being so smoothly poetic XD

MoxyMikki (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Nov 2010

I think this is the perfect example of mastering the english language. You have a creative use of dialogue which generates an enjoyable flow and ease of reading. I enjoyed this so much that I added it to my faves list! Also love the idea of making a story of a poem - very Poe of you! :)

Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

This had a very Edgar Alan Poe feel about it, and I absolutely loved it. This was another great story from you Hairann, Well Done!!

Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Nov 2010

Very nice.  I really liked this a lot.  It was very inventive and new.  I wish I were as creative.  This flowed nicely and I loved Jaken's telling of the tale.  I felt like I was back in one of Edgar Alan Poe's books.  Great job.

Miss Anna (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Nov 2010

-eyes glues to the computer screen-

I really like this, and I love your style of writing! This was one of my favorite lines ---> “I'm sorry my mate, she can not be found, But it is to this manor she is bound. Leave here we shall and you'll be free, Of her haunting memory.”

Please keep up the good work, I like reading your stuff!

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