I have to admit, this is a fresh begining, as i have never read the short story you told us about.  ...and it is more than interesting...it has a lot of potential and last but not least, it has heart. Impressing in its short lenght, but captivating...therefore, do us all a favor and, please, continue it; leaving at just...i want this woman ...is frustrating at best.

I really, really like this! Hopefully you decide to continue it- I haven't read the short story it's based on, but this is so intriguing. I feel like Kagome's sorrow is so viseral and real- just great characterization.

Can't wait for more!

I hope that you continue this! At least to a two-shot or three-shot. That would be pretty perfect. And I love the way that you wrote Kagome's part, very beautiful. Thank you!

I just had to review once i read that you might not be continuing! please continue. i like this story alot! and by the way, is Kagome barren or is it because ahe was married to Inuyasha?

Urgh... tried to do this earlier, but Dokuga bunged up on me.

So - ahem - onto the review.

Not continue?! Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? This story is so beautifully written, and I would be greatly disappointed if you chose not to continue. If you've got more ideas for it, I say to you, 'onward, good author!' Don't ever think it isn't interesting or worth continuation. I am so intrigued by not only the story, but all the possibilities that come with it.

The flow is just magnificent, especially considering the content. What I am referring to is the fact that this whole chapter is basically focused around her dancing an the reasons behind it/reactions to it. I find that ninety-nine percent of the time, when there is dancing of any kind portrayed in a story - even if it's only a little - the author really botches it. Not all the time, but a lot of the time. It always seems really awkward and interrupts the flow. So the fact that you were able to pull this off so splendidly just astounds me! Great job!

I have sooooo many questions regarding this fic. Is it perhaps Inuyasha who is unable to produce offspring? Could it simply be that Kagome is destined for someone greater? What does Tensaiga's thrumming mean? Oh, the suspense is killing me!!

So, needless to say, you have my attention, and I sincerely hope you decide to continue on with this. Anyone who doesn't find this interesting is absolutely one-hundred percent loopy. However, you are the writer, and I will respect whatever decision you come to... Either way, I just want to thank you for the wonderful read! I'm going to check out your other story now!

HEART

CR~

P.S. I dunno if it makes a difference, but there's no harm in trying. So.... *waggles bribe cookie in your general direction* C'mooooooon. You know you wanna continue....

I happen to like this story and it would be a shame if you didn't continue. I'd really like to know what happens next!

Please continue!

Very different from HFO's Sesshoumaru. Writing style between your two stories are different too. Is this how you write when inspiration hits?

Good

This was written beautifully. And it is a very intriguing story. I know I would be pleased to see it continued for it has already captured my attention. :)

oooohhhhh!!! This is too fabulous for words.  Her body new that Inuysha wasn't right for her but Sesshoumaru knows she belongs with him! Delicious and intriguing! I hope you decide to write more!

I find this intro to be very intriguing. I think based upon what I have read this would be a most interesting story. I thought about reading the short story that inspired you to write this but feel that it might take away from the story you have created so I will wait patiently as you decide what you are going to do.

I really like this so far! :)

Keep up the awesome work!

This was beautifully written.  Please do continue and expand on it. 

I'd say continue.  It's interesting enough to make leaving it in this form almost a crime.  What you have written so far just begs for completion.

Amber

Please continue this story.  I saw Kagome as she danced, the fire in the background, the way her body moved and arched.  The way her face was trying so hard to hide her pain.  I saw Sess looking on at her, his face only showing a slight interest, but in his eyes you knew he wanted her.   I Need to know if he is going to give back her heart and if his sword was sharing a secret.  Please you must write more.

I found the story interesting as well as your writing style. I am intrigued to find out how Sesshoumaru and Kagome will interact outside of the wedding. I must say that I hope you will continue with it!

Interesting concept. Im interested in reading more about sesshomaru and kagome and the pull he feels for her.