This is a really good story, I can't wait to read more. I look forward to Kagome next escape attempt, I espically hope we'll get to see Sesshomaru questioning Sai about Kagome's information overload.

I saw that you trying to find a beta to look over this story. I would be interested in looking the story over for you. While I was reading the story the one thing you seemed to have the most trouble with was the english tenses. I'm pretty good with those and would be willing to help you touch up the chapters.

If you'd like I could edit one of the chapters that you already have posted, then you could see if you'll think I'll be any help. If you want to look at something I've written search under users for Fantasy Dreamer 1992 on fanfiction.net. So just reply back to me and tell me if your interested in having me beta the story. If not keep up the great work there never enough Kagome Sesshomaru fanfictions out there. :D

GOOD THING I WASN'T DRINKING ANYTHING, OR I WOULD HAVE SPIT IT UP, OR MY NOSE WOULD HAVE BECUME A STRAW! LOL! POOR SESSHY, HOPE HE ENJOYS ADVENTURING AS MUCH AS HIS BROTHER!

please update,  please update,  please update,  this is a great story.

this story is getting more interesting & more intense, will her old friends join her & her new ally ? Am I right that she is now going to have stronger powers & some increased, strenght? more speed??? increased healing ??? will this affect her lifespan now that the Shikon has made its (final?) home within her? & as she masters her new increased powers & learns to purify the 'Kuro no tama' will it take/drain less of her power the more she purifies/cleanses??        Will this story become a Kagome  & Sessh romance ??? 

Very interesting indeed....I like the direction the story is going.  Please update soon:)

Wow this is amazing, so this new threat wants to prosess a much powrful demon, well the only Demon that I know who is very powerful is Sesshomaru?!!!! he is pretty much a huge threat, because he is prob even more powerful than his own father!!!.

I hope you update soon

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Megan007

please ,please,please update this story soon I can't wait to see what will happen next,what Kagome's new powers are & what each of the 4 souls mean by both being a part of her & becoming one to live in her heart. I don't mean what they each represent as they basically told her when she was still floating in the depths of her clouded mind bascially unaware & in a dreamlike state.

 I can't help but wonder if  she will ever be able to return through the well to her time. Also,it seemed as though the 4 souls felt bad that Inuyasha was gone but they also seemed somewhat eager for her to awaken, unafraid of Sessh, even telling her not to fear as she was not alone .It gave me the impression that she was to start another part of her life, as if it was fate & they (the 4 souls) were well aware that she'd be safe, feel safe & had no option but to accept & experience whatever she was going through.

 When you think the jewel waited 500 yrs to be reborn in her & admitted they needed to create a body they could live in(did they mean to live forever  within her ,giving her all these strengths & abilities to make her the last Shikon Miko) I can't help but wonder about her obviously increased healing ability & the confusing or incomplete  info the jewel told her about her being human in heart & body ,yet admiting her physical body is much stronger than any other  & then telling her that due to the combination within her of energy from the purest of souls,inner power & holy powers of her family bloodlines combined with (the energy &/or power of)Midoriko,s  make her immensely powerful & all she needs now is the ability to control that power. 

Although the 4 voices finally showed themselves to her as colored orbs she was confused & Kagome finally asked who they were & why she could hear  & see them now.

"We could not manifest ourselves in front of you if we are incomplete and currently out of your body. Kagome, we are the four souls of the Shikon no Tama.

"Ara-mitama (courage)" Said the red sphere of light..

"Nigi-mitama (family or friendship)" Said the blue sphere of light.

"Kushi-mitama (wisdom)" Said the yellow sphere of light.

"Saki-mitama (love)" Said the pink light.

The voices from the blue and pink light were soft and feminine, while the red and yellow lights were low and masculine, yet gentle.

"May I ask something? I want to know. . why me? I mean, why's the shikon inside me? Is it because I'm Kikyou's reincarnation?" Kagome asked.The yellow sphere of light came closer to Kagome before she heard a gentle masculine voice.

"Osanago,we guess this is the right time for you to know the truth. We knew we needed a body after Kikyou burned the jewel with her body. You are not her reincarnation like you thought you were. You are more than that"

" Child. We need a body to live in. After nearly five hundred years we found you,the woman who suits our needs. Your mothers pure soul and inner power that comes from her ancestor, and your father’s bloodline possesses immense holy power only added  to the benefits that we needed to make the best possible guardian for the shikon no tama. We entered her body and waited until her body was ready to conceive a child." The yellow light continued.The blue light came closer and continued what the yellow light was explaining. "We, the four souls, become one spirit and live inside the new life's heart. Your heart.  But in order to exist within your body we created a much stronger physical body for you. Your power, however, is the combination of energy that you inherited from both your parent’s bloodline and from Midoriko power. You just have to learn how to control it in full." So am I human If you created me or am I then..something else?" She asked confused"Do not worry, osanago. You are human, in body and in heart. But still you are special from everyone else." The red sphere assured her.

The four souls in unison encircled her before entering her body.The soft voice of the woman who first spoke to her came back. "Kagome. . . you must wake up now. Everything will be alright. You are not alone. . . wake up. . .

These were all the odd things that made me think of all kinds of questions & it's almost painful waiting to see what will happen in the following chapters.. This story is unigue & I'm dying to know what will happen next & when will Kagome tell Sessh or someone what happened with the jewel & how the 4 souls are now a permanent part of her.She has to tell someone & she has to speak to them more to get more answers

we can't find the picture (pouting) plz help!

Wow I am so happy that you updated, I hope you update real soon!!!, man the last part was super sexy, I know I am crazy, there is just somthing that, is super sexy when Sesshomaru is on the verge of killing somthing or someone!!! LOL hehehehe. I know I am a freak.

I hope you update!!! soon!!, can't wait for the next chapter, and what will happen next.

Hugs

Megan007

I like this story a lot :) I am soooo glad Kikyo is dead and that Sesshy saved Kagome!

Keep up the good work!