1CarinoInu (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Sep 2010

I don't know what's going on with the notifications from Dokuga, but I'm not getting updates very timely or at all.  I didn't get yours.  I only managed to catch this on another site, but then when I logged in, I got an error.  Ugh!

 

Anyway, great follow up.  Nice to see Inu get his.  Kagome let him know how much she was hurt and how his contact alienation and betrayal affected her and that she moved on.  It's too bad it couldn't be continued, showing Inu's growth and moving on, learning from his mistakes.  But I think you capture that pretty well in "In Death," didn't you?   :)

Always a pleasure to read your works.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

i love this! but then  jump at the chance to read any of your SK's! this is jsut awesome though, Inuyasha's such a jerk!


laenfante (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

You might not be happy with it, but the rest of us are thrilled. The emotions just come pouring off the screen, I think I actually stopped breathing for a moment when Kagome picked up the bow.

I sincerely hope you will give us a third part, showing Kagome whole-hearted again. With Sesshomaru's healing touch, of course! <g>


Sophie (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

It was worth reading. I really like how you portray Kagome in your fics-it's very belivable for me. Another great work! Bravo!


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