I love this story. It's so sweet and their relationship developed at such a realistic pace despite this being a one-shot. There were a few grammatical mistakes that require me to do some mental rewriting so I could understand what you were trying to convey but otherwise the story flowed incredibly well. Nicely done.

The wide range of emotions you can show and tell in these short vignettes is amazing! I particularly like how Kagome decided to deal with her contractions... smirk

I had to come back and read this again all in one piece. It's so good Ane! <3

Hahaha omg that was awesome! And not a bad idea to boot, every woman should do that to their husbands, just so they know how it feels when their giving birth!!!

Lovely job as always m'dear!!  <333333333

This was sweet, but man I felt bad for Sesshoumaru and his abused penis!  LOL!  

Nice progression, and the story line was very entertaining :D  Well done!

THANK YOU FOR RARE JEWEL! MORE PLEASE!