Reviews for Fuyu no Shimekiri by Kanna37

Aryos (Chapter 14) - Tue 18 Feb 2014

Thank you for these stories. You write the the most beautiful love stories. They are  so touching, tug at your heart and so warm. 

These stories are a must read! Simply beautiful.

 


Shade (Chapter 14) - Fri 16 Mar 2012

Thank you for writing this story...it really hits a spot on your heart..


amy (Chapter 14) - Wed 16 Feb 2011

IF I DID NOT KNOW BETTER, I WOULD GET CAVITIES FROM YOUR STORY, IT IS SO SWEET!BANG UP JOB!THESE STORIES WARM MY HEART!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 14) - Sat 12 Feb 2011

Chapter 10 has to be the best.  I love how Kagome teases Sesshoumaru about poking the snake with sticks, playing with his food (ewww), oh and yanking killer's chain (LOLROF) and just plain playing with his prey.  Good times.....good times.....


Shattered (Chapter 14) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

What a beautiful story! I did not know of the previous version, so thank you for putting in the effort to make it even better and share it with us. I am very happy I spotted it in the updates, as well as read the prequels to go with it.

I love how you wrote Satori; generally she seems to be cast as cold, distant, controlling, or just plain bitchy (or some combination thereof), and it was such a refreshing change to see her genuinely looking out for Sess without making him a pawn to her own needs, and picture her giddy with the idea of grandpups.


laenfante (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Feb 2011

(sigh) I just adore this story; always have. And now you've polished it to an even brighter shine. Absolutely beautiful! Thank you SO much for sharing your gift with us.


unknownmiko (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Feb 2011

this was a beautiful story and I loved every minute of it.  you had everything a good story needs romance, action and emotional moments that make you say awww. I thank-you for sharing such a wonderful fic and hope to one day read another great story from you..


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Feb 2011

Yay! Love the epilogue. Awesome ending to an awesome story.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 13) - Thu 10 Feb 2011

Awesome, awesome, awesome. I enjoyed the last few chapters of this fic so far. I'm glad this time around, you brought in Sesshmom into it. I wonder whatever happened to Hikari's daughter though. Was she killed? Is she still a threat? Was she possibly exiled? Was there a youkai who was able to make her submit to him as his mate? Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. Must continue.


animejunky78 (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Dec 2010

Sorry for thr typo.  I'm so excited I can't type straight.  I can't wait for more is what I meant. ;P


animejunky78 (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Dec 2010

As beautiful as it originally was.  You know I love this set of stories.  I'm glad you got back to the revisions.  Can wait for the rest.  


River (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Dec 2010

Poor Jaken, sure of his death!  I have read this before, but I am enjoying reading it again!

 


River (Chapter 8) - Mon 20 Dec 2010

Poor Jaken, sure of his death!  I have read this before, but I am enjoying reading it again!

 


GG (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

OMG!!!!! i luv your story soooooo much! i hope you keep writing more! =D

 


River (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Aug 2010

Looking forward to reading the re-write!


MissTeak (Chapter 3) - Fri 27 Aug 2010

"He had to take this slowly - he was playing for keeps, and there was still a very large obstacle in his way - Inuyasha.

As always."

LOL. This line is pure genius with how true and honest it is! Now Sesshoumaru, how would you like me to get rid of Inuyasha? I'll help you flush him down the toilet if I have to. XD

I like how you made Mr. High-and-Mighty read into Kagome's words to see if he had any chance of being with her! It's rare to see him so insecure and unsure of himself, yet he knows very clearly that Kagome is who he wants for himself. And Kagome had to be the most adorable thing - she actually said that she might have been looking at the wrong brother!! Now she has no idea how right she was...but it's okay, better late than never in my opinion.

Awww the whole part with the courtship made me smile to myself and go into fangasms with how cute it was!! You do fluff so beautifully, Amber! While Sesshoumaru can be so infuriatingly dense for how smart he usually is, I still find it really cute. 

"Did you not think that I would notice a beautiful woman? Am I not a male?"

GO, GO SESSHY!! SESSHY FTW!!! *waves pom-poms*

The idea of destroying everything that doesn't go one's way is tempting indeed...I should take a leaf out of Sesshoumaru's book and go Dokkasou on my damned washing machine. It left for washing machine heaven two hours ago and I am very unhappy about it. Arrrrgh.

And ooooooh OMG Shippo is coming in! Yay!! XD Now I am kinda feeling upset that I chose to read this, yet all excited at the same time, because I am left wanting MORE. XD Waiting is painful~ lalalala.

Once again, Amber, great job and congrats on your wins!!

 


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Aug 2010

LOL don't we all feel so discouraged by evil disclaimers?? *Le Sigh*

Now I feel like a complete idiot, because they have obviously built their relationship up in the earlier chapters of Fuyu, and here I am, reading how he wants for her to be his mate. Okay, Jasmine, you're one crappy reader. *nags at self* I am so sorry, Amber dear. Pardon the quality of this review if it turns out bad (which is milder way of saying 'totally ignorant and prone to stupidity')

"And all mine in her death... though I would willingly give everything I own for it to be mine, in life. Her death only leaves me incomplete."

This line totally tugged at my heartstrings. It is so emotionally powerful.

All the parts in Italics were beautiful; I like how you actually went so deep into Sesshoumaru's emotions, and gave readers an alternative perspective. Usually, we get Kagome's perspective, not Sesshoumaru's, given how difficult it is to characterize someone who does a stunning impression of an iceberg.

Ahahaha YAY!! I was secretly entertaining the thought of him using Tenseiga to save her, and of course he did! Nice one, Sesshoumaru!

The idea of Kagome becoming immortal because the jewel wished for her to be is beautiful! :) I have nothing against cliche story lines, but I am a little tired of reading the exchange of blood thingy that we see all the time in fanfiction. As you might already realize, I am reviewing as I read. I find that this allows me to leave better and more sincere reviews.

It's so sweet of him to reassure her that she is nothing lowly as she perceives herself to be. Sesshoumaru's really nice in the...well, Sesshoumaru-way. You kept him very much in character while making him likable at the same time.

Luckily for me, I have chapter three to read! YAY! <3 Much love to you, Amber, this is lovely!

-Jasmine


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Aug 2010

Okay, I have to admit that I haven't checked the earlier installments to the Fuyu series, I was determined to read this one. Sometimes, as a writer of long stories, I tend to miss out on reading good, long stories written by other amazing authors such as yourself. That's really a shame, because if you could write things like drabbles and short chapters so well, I can only imagine how good the long ones would be.

The prologue is interesting; Kagome started off dead? And of all people, it was Sesshoumaru watching over her! That's definitely a pretty refreshing idea, and I am looking forward to reading more! :D


Brego Whitecloud (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Aug 2010

I read this one last year on FF, and I was  enthralled with it then.  I read it through a few times after the initial reading as well. I was quite pleased to see it here!  I will look forward to reading what's old is new. 

 

BW


1CarinoInu (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Aug 2010

Oh yay!  I'm so glad you're doing a revamp of this story.  I loved it the first time I read it, and am looking forward to seeing the changes you make, especially to the characters.  


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