short, sweet, funny, full of action, and i loved every minute of it. great writing. i think this may have been your first fan fic story b/c of the errors in it. i did my best to translate and add to while i was reading. when i did it became more readable for me. i hope to read more of your wonderful stories. c'ya'
lol very cute short story.
Though it was a bit rushed....I enjoyed it! Great job
amy (Chapter 32) - Fri 10 Jun 2011
So wrong, it is a girl! Blossom is born!He fainted? lOLall the way!
hey i loved this story and thanks for not putting Inuyasha in it that was my fav part. i don't like him..hehe...this was hallarius and thanks
swift death (Chapter 32) - Sat 18 Sep 2010
i thought that was so freaking funny. i love your story. *giggle* :)
jojo661538 (Chapter 32) - Wed 15 Sep 2010
hahhahhahhahhahahhahhahhahha oh my gosh this was a good story especially theending keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^
Diana (Chapter 32) - Thu 02 Sep 2010
I almost wet myself like 4 times while I was reading this because I was laughing so hard. LOVES IT!!!
Haha amazing ending. I about peed myself. <3 Poor Sessh lol. My dad was asleep the whole time my mother was in labor with me. He woke up when the nurses almost dropped me :) That's why I'm so special, I flew as a baby ;)
Fluffy (Chapter 7) - Tue 31 Aug 2010
lol the no body no crime part on the last one was priceless but making her do 100 push ups is seriously funny XD
I guess even Sesshomaru isn't ammune to everything. lol
kait<3 (Chapter 31) - Mon 30 Aug 2010
SESSHOMARU FAINTED?????????????
Sessygurl (Chapter 31) - Mon 30 Aug 2010
ROFLMAO, love it, love it, love it!
lmao =x hahahahahahaha so awesome!
Nyuka (Chapter 30) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
phew....glad thats over....It wasn't bad for a battle scene I got some great imagery, but I'm not sure where ruins would be located in moderntimes so close to a city....XD....I'm glad that every bodies okay, I know that what could have happened could have been alot worse then what did....believe me some authors love to make their readers cry....but I guess that is good in of itself....well thankyou for updating now lets see if he can get back befor the birthing.....hehe............Nyuka
O_O man a live! i think i'm in love with this, i really hope that bank gets it!
Sessygurl (Chapter 28) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
Spend girls spend!
thats just awesome!
awe! loves! stupid bank!
Nyuka (Chapter 27) - Wed 25 Aug 2010
you write so quickly... I think I said that but still it make me so happy...Thankyou.....Ya know the suspence is killing me, makes me feel more and more worried for this battle....I hope nothing goes wrong.......Nyuka
Sessygurl (Chapter 26) - Tue 24 Aug 2010
Take your time
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