I love this story! Amazing, it sucked me right inIto the story. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read!!! :D you are now my favorite author!!!!!!!!
This is a really good story, I enjoyed reading it. This is random, and you don't have to pay any attention at all to it, but I think another good name for this fic could be "A Little Thing Called Teamwork", just cause those are the last words typed, and to me, they seem to fit better. As I said, you don't have to pay any attention to me, it's just a thought. Sincerely, White-Blood-Rose
terryanna (Chapter 3) - Thu 06 Oct 2011
rewrite it in third person and it should become even better than it is now. I like the plot but I hate first person stories and the fact that I've continue to read yours even though it's a first person story means it interest me despite my hate.
(Chapter 10) - Mon 27 Jun 2011
AWESOME~ ENDING~~~!!!!! ^O^
(Chapter 10) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
Loved the ending sooooo much! ^^
And the title of the epilogue fits perfectly! Great Job with fic overall! =]
(Chapter 5) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
|Well the title to the last chapter was really fitting, the cat and the mouse? And I really laughed on the last line of this chapter. And I am really waiting to see Kagome on the night of the gala. I mean she's gonna blow Sess's mind, right?
(Chapter 5) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
|Well the title to the last chapter was really fitting, the cat and the mouse? And I really laughed on the last line of this chapter.
(Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
|A well written chapter I guess? I mean little ones tend to know more than they lead on... And I love Rin. She's soooooooooooo cute! (With a cute dad too!LOL!!)
(Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
|I liked the part when SEss said, just one punch! And a good plot for the fic.
(Chapter 10) - Tue 11 Nov 2008
| I loved your story. I would of never expected Kagome siging up for the army.
raven (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008
|hay um i like the story so far and i realize that your fininshed with it but chapter 3 needs to be fixed it is cutting off the words on the side of the page i havent checked the other chapters yet so you might want to check them out but yah please do try to fix that and if your not going to then atleast take it off the web site it isnt nice to leave unreadable stories on here just to tourcher us
so thank you for your time
|OMG I cried near the end, like SOBBING crying.
Nice work!!! very well done!
(Chapter 3) - Thu 29 May 2008
|i don't know if it just my computer oir what but for some reason chapter 3 didn't come up right it looks like it was shifted over and it is missing the last couple words of each sentence. but if you copy and paste the whole page into a word doc everything is there. other than that this story is really good so far, ( i haven't finished what you have uploaded yet!) i like how you incorporated Kagome's softer side into the story with Rin!
Elisa (Chapter 10) - Thu 29 May 2008
|I started reading this story earlier today and I just couldn't stop. I've never read a fic like this that I actually enjoyed. Wonderful job! I can't wait to read more from you. ^_^