Reviews for Never After by Aura

Katrina Kee (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Jul 2013

Oh now this story is very good! Please update!


Katrina Kee (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 May 2013

Please continue this storyline!!! It's very good!!!¡ i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!

 


Gothic Lust (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jul 2010

Interesting. Very interesting. I want to know more! Please update soon.


FayeMegan (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Jul 2010

Oooo looks goooood. Update soon!


a Mysticlady (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Jul 2010

Interesting plot and beginning. Could use some editing and look at the end there seems to be an error where Kagome and Sesshoumaru are leaving and then it goes back to Sango finding Kagome at the building and more explanation of where they are. But other than that I can't wait to see more. Please let us know if you need a beta reader.

 


knifethrower (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Jul 2010

I think there is some missing text near the end of the chapter.  It goes from Sesshomaru picking Kagome up in his arm to Sango suddenly being where ever Kagome has been taken to, and speaking to her as though Sesshomaru is not there.

The story itself bodes to be very interesting.  It seems as though you have a strong plot planned out with a lot of action.  It would be nice to see some editing.


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