Reviews for Faded Memories by Chie

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Emma (Chapter 15) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

Starts out strong but by chapter 15, it's taken a very steep nosedive. OOC Sessh can be good sometimes. This is not one of those times. Honestly, if I hadn't read Life After Loss first, I would have completely written you off. Mostly what's bugging me is that Tokyo to Milan is a good eight hours on a plane. Nobody in their right mind would fly that far for dinner, if you left in the evening you'd arrive in time for breakfast the next morning.

There's also that weird chapter that was written backwards????? I kind of get why but damn it's confusing.

Argh. I don't wanna be mean but this fic is pretty disappointing after reading LAL and Tables Turned. I think it could be amazing with a rewrite, though, and I'd love to see that. Faded Memories has good bones and a really great idea, and I know you're a great author. I just can't push through mid-00s Ultra-Fangirl-Squee-type writing anymore. Not when there's so many fics with amazing characterization and plot (again, Life After Loss.... !!!!!) out there.

I'm gonna go leave a good review on LAL now, I feel guilty praising it here when I haven't actually told you how much I love it on its own review page.

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 5) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

interesting! I wouldn't have thought she would be interested in him already. However, I suppose it could be residual from the locked memories. 

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 4) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

Hmmm very intriguing chapter! I just adore the email Sesshy sent haha 

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Rin mated someone?! Kagura is STILL going after Sesshy?! Geesh lol. Also, how intriguing that Kagome can see the markings when nobody else can! 




Too bad Shippo died. :( :( :(

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Ewww that's like over the top mushy gushy romanticy. Ewwwww.


Anywhos - seems that Sesshy hasn't changed much LOL. Also, Kayade? Maaaaay that be a reincarnation of Kaede?! I can't wait to find out!!

Selenityhyperion (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Woooah. This is a new take on the story! ^_^

Isabel (Chapter 26) - Mon 25 Apr 2016

I am a fan of your stories. You have interesting plots, and they are well-written. I know that this story was published almost 10 years ago, and I have to say that you've improved since then. This story has an interesting concept and I like it. I've noticed some grammatical errors but overall, I can see your development as a writer based on this old fanfic and your more recent ones.

Seluna Maru (Chapter 10) - Wed 16 Mar 2016

Why must everyone know they slept together?

Seluna Maru (Chapter 8) - Wed 16 Mar 2016

You should really fix this, please. It makes things a bit difficult for your readers. Especially those using their phones. 

Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Mar 2016

Thus was your first? So far I must say I like it and I'm intrigued. Of course all that dying had me a bit depressed but this is so well written. I seem extremely pleased because fro the 2 weeks I have been searching for a good story but my goodness they are just soooooo bad or some folks write alot of unnecessary parts thus ruining a perfectly good story. And I try not to be rude but the site owners have called me out so I guess Im still too honest. I just hate to see people waste their time on a bad tale. When I read the reviews its where I look to decide at times but the reviews are either not honest or just modest and sympathetic. Ok Im going on and on. Point is this is rather good esp if it got me wanting to read more after the first chp. 

Raynell (Chapter 26) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

Oh my god ... I love, love, love this story. And I love how you wrote Kagome, and how she and Sesshomaru (did not) get along. The banter was superb, fun, hilarious ... it was absolutely perfect so when the angst hit, it hit hard. The penultimate chapter was heartbreaking and I just wanted to hug Sesshomaru so badly.

My only complaint is ... I wish the story was longer. Yes, I want one more chapter dealing with Kagome's recovery and slow acceptance of her new reality. Because your story was just so lovely, I wanted it to last as long as possible. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us.

Raynell (Chapter 8) - Sun 23 Aug 2015

I don't think the reverse time-jump experiment worked. It just got really jumbled and to be honest, it irritated me and spoiled my enjoyment of the story. Sorry. But it's good to try nevertheless. One'll never grow if one doesn't try, right? I've read your other works and I can see you've grown as a writer.

Anyway, keep on writing and growing.

marisel (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 May 2015

this story wro ke my heart and make me laugh romantic  with a lot of  plot.  love it.  keep writing   

satuross (Chapter 21) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

wahhh i thought it was all humor. then suddenly angst!!

satuross (Chapter 8) - Tue 05 Nov 2013


satuross (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Nov 2013

oh wow!. angst!

Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 26) - Thu 09 Dec 2010

So darn cute! I loved it! =)

Sena (Chapter 26) - Sat 05 Jun 2010

Wow, I really enjoyed this fic, it was very original. A lot different than others I've read where Sessh lives to Kagome's era. The only part I did not like that much was the strange out of time chapter where Kagome sleeps with Sessh the first time. That chapter is difficult to muddle through. I stuck with your fic, and I'm glad I did, it was a great fic with a great concept, thanks for sharing with us!

wickedone43 (Chapter 26) - Tue 01 Jun 2010

OMG!!!  This was great!  You didn't flinch when a very sad event had to happen in order for the two to grow.  I loved the storyline.  It was simply AWESOME!!  I have decided to read the rest of your fics.  I know you wrote this some time ago, but better late than never.  Very well done!

Karli (Chapter 26) - Thu 20 May 2010

Hey Pal

After reading your other story chain of love, had a peeky at your other ones and this one caught my eye. through most of it just had me in laughing fits. mainly the part of the pizza delivery sesshomaru. ill add it to my favorite stories so i can come back to it when i want to read it again.

Cheers Mate

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