Thus was your first? So far I must say I like it and I'm intrigued. Of course all that dying had me a bit depressed but this is so well written. I seem extremely pleased because fro the 2 weeks I have been searching for a good story but my goodness they are just soooooo bad or some folks write alot of unnecessary parts thus ruining a perfectly good story. And I try not to be rude but the site owners have called me out so I guess Im still too honest. I just hate to see people waste their time on a bad tale. When I read the reviews its where I look to decide at times but the reviews are either not honest or just modest and sympathetic. Ok Im going on and on. Point is this is rather good esp if it got me wanting to read more after the first chp.
Oh my god ... I love, love, love this story. And I love how you wrote Kagome, and how she and Sesshomaru (did not) get along. The banter was superb, fun, hilarious ... it was absolutely perfect so when the angst hit, it hit hard. The penultimate chapter was heartbreaking and I just wanted to hug Sesshomaru so badly.
My only complaint is ... I wish the story was longer. Yes, I want one more chapter dealing with Kagome's recovery and slow acceptance of her new reality. Because your story was just so lovely, I wanted it to last as long as possible. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us.
(Chapter 8) - Sun 23 Aug 2015
I don't think the reverse time-jump experiment worked. It just got really jumbled and to be honest, it irritated me and spoiled my enjoyment of the story. Sorry. But it's good to try nevertheless. One'll never grow if one doesn't try, right? I've read your other works and I can see you've grown as a writer.
Anyway, keep on writing and growing.
(Chapter 26) - Sat 23 May 2015
this story wro ke my heart and make me laugh romantic with a lot of plot. love it. keep writing
wahhh i thought it was all humor. then suddenly angst!!
oh wow!. angst!
So darn cute! I loved it! =)
(Chapter 26) - Sat 05 Jun 2010
Wow, I really enjoyed this fic, it was very original. A lot different than others I've read where Sessh lives to Kagome's era. The only part I did not like that much was the strange out of time chapter where Kagome sleeps with Sessh the first time. That chapter is difficult to muddle through. I stuck with your fic, and I'm glad I did, it was a great fic with a great concept, thanks for sharing with us!
wickedone43 (Chapter 26) - Tue 01 Jun 2010
OMG!!! This was great! You didn't flinch when a very sad event had to happen in order for the two to grow. I loved the storyline. It was simply AWESOME!! I have decided to read the rest of your fics. I know you wrote this some time ago, but better late than never. Very well done!
(Chapter 26) - Thu 20 May 2010
After reading your other story chain of love, had a peeky at your other ones and this one caught my eye. through most of it just had me in laughing fits. mainly the part of the pizza delivery sesshomaru. ill add it to my favorite stories so i can come back to it when i want to read it again.
(Chapter 26) - Wed 17 Mar 2010
I have to say, I really enjoyed to plotline in this one. It was different than most I have seen/read. I found it touching and frusterating at turns. The parts with the death of their pup was particularlly hard, having been in that situation personally. But I felt you did a nice job over all, especially for a first fict.
(Chapter 14) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
A mind blender of a chapter... good work!
(Chapter 13) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
You have a truly twisted mind you know that!? Bloody funny story you got going here.
(Chapter 12) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Now talk about split personalities! I like how you got the wedding cancel, wondering how Kagome's family will react.
(Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh bloody hell the ending was funny... so hope the wedding gets called off though!
(Chapter 10) - Mon 26 Oct 2009
Oh can't wait for when the news comes out about Kagome... good chapter!
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