One of the funniest parts of this story is sesshomaru a hatred for the scrolls lol they just declared war and still the scrolls are in his mind 

I think they're all under Spells and don't even know it.  Probably naraku is the placer of the spells and that sesshomaru was the one kagome had to spend time with as a child and that's how her and Inuyasha became friends 

Oh yeah, a spoiled princess does make sense.

Kagome is probably the most useless slave/servant ever. Always late and lazing about and quick to show her temper. Kikyou should give her lessons. Even if she was working a paid job, she'd get fired for frequent insubordination and tardiness.

great story. loved it from start to finish. it had a different plot than i was used too, but it turned out alright in the end. the mating ritual was new for me, but i loved it all the same. good writing. keep it up. bye

Sounds more like a bride price. A dowry is typically paid to the husband by the father of the bride. Hence the reason that in English aristocracy impoverished lords would marry rich young women. The woman's family would gain a title to their bloodline, and the aristocrat would replenish his coffers with the woman's dowry.

You official have a new big fan. I am going to read every complete story u write. Only complete because your cliff hangers always make me want to read more and idk if i can handle it if u don't update soon enough.your stories are just to great :)

So I'm fairly certain I've read this before and can't for the life of me remember if I left a review or not, so here it is (or here's another one lol) I've been looking for stuff to read since I've already worn out my Fav Stories list and a majority of the stories aren't finished (which is so frustrating but I'm just as guilty of not finishing my stuff either- hehe oops?*sheepish smile*) and that's when I came across this one. You did a great job and I couldn't stop reading because I just had to know what happened and I feel bad for Onigumo and Kagome, I mean yeah it sucks he got passed over because he wasn't born with power but at the same time it's no excuse for what he did. And I'm glad the spell wasn't so powerful that the characters were left completely clueless, you almost had me worried for a moment there when Sesshomaru put that collar on her though. And seriously you are so the Cliffy Queen lol! That's okay though, I love cliff hangers and have managed to pull off a few myself *evil smile* Anywho I'm going to stop rambling now, great job lady!

The story was amazing and I enjoyed it.

This story was amazing! I only found it after it was already completed and simply could not stop reading until it was over.

I really like how you took the well known idea of slave Kagome in Sesshoumaru's castle that catches his attention and, instead of doing the same old plots as always you created a very interesting twist to it. The mystery of her memories and the idea of the spell and the whole concept of miko/demon matings is really interesting and I think that could be something you might explore in future stories (the mystery and suspense, intricate plots and the such - not necessarily the same ideas that you have here).

I really liked the mystery and found myself hoping there would be more to it, make the characters work more to figure things out. I like what you did in this story but I think the suspense could have been built up more and also there relationship could've developed more in the meantime. Even though you didn't have this question come up in this plot, if you had them fall in love all over again there are many interesting things that could come out of it: guilt for "betraying" the memory of their true love, doubt that their love depends on their positions in life (having them fall in love again when those positions were different would take away any doubt there could be on their love).

I don't know how old this story is but I will definately be looking up your other stories! Maybe some might even explore motherhood and Kagome having pups and her relationship with Sesshoumaru. What a mother is capable of when defending her "pups". ^.^

Loved it!! ja ne!

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hey loved your story and hope you update on the other ones :)

I came upon your story when a member posted a fanart spcifically pointing out this story as the inspiration and setting of it. I can't remember what the fanart was but being a fanfic reading whore i was poked with curiousity and decided to hunt down the story and at it to my long list of favorite stories--which is basically my list of stories i intend to read because they looked interesting. It sat there for a while as i was keeping up with only a few at the time, but being without new updates to those and not sure where to go with my own fanfic works but desiring my SessKag crack, i sifted through and picked this one to read and satisfy my craving.

Let me tell you, i read this from start to finish in one sitting. From late evening into the early morn. And i greatly enjoyed it, and being that i am one who lived by the age old code of 'do unto others as you would like done unto you' i felt a nice review was in order. Since i wanted it to be long and meaningful, i saved the link to my favorites with intent to return with a refreshed mind. A few days pasted. Now i am here, wishing to express my thoughts and praises to your lovely story.

First and foremost, i was intruiged by your plot line and found myself in the beginning a bit saddened by the whole 'Kagome has no memories, where is the Sesshy' however i found myself loving how you chose to do things. The plot was good and well placed in the storyline. You wrote very well and kept a good flow and i'm immpressed seeing as it was almost a commission like request for the story that you wrote. So the very core of the story wasn't even yours, which can make it harder to do when not everything you like. You did a great job writing Kikyo, then Kikyo and Inu together, seeing as you apparently dislike her. I never would have guessed from your portrayal of her that you felt so. ^-^

Secondly, i apsolutely fell in love with the idea of Kagome and Sesshy being children together and falling in love during such, it was adorable and sweet. The whole idea clever and interesting as well. Also, i rather liked how you portrayed InuPapa! His love of pups was cute and very fitting i thought. I think you did a wondrous job entwining the past of these members along with the present, a skill i am always anvious and appreciative of. T 3T

A third matter is i was personally a bit annoyed at how you initially portrayed Naraku, having his human self seem unwanting of the evil that he gained. HOWEVER, i recinded such thoughts when i saw what all became of the character in the ending battles. It all made more sense and was a twist i would have never thought of--and i ADORE nasty little twists *maniacal giggles*-- i think you did a excellent with your writing of his character even if it was not something you would normally do.

The battle, you did so nicely with the battle! Such scenes are always hard, what is too much and what is too little?, what is too fast and what is too tedious?, but i believe you did a marvelous work of the action and a nice plot twist with Kagome's uncertainty at the final moment...really messing with readers minds--love-- simply well done.

Lastly i wanted to give my opinion as to why this is your most popular story. My bet is on the fact that --starting with the general-- it's well written, clever, and smart. Then there is the bonus of nearly all key members being present! And no need to have a nasty Inu. Finally you have a happy joining of the pair, with children, a giddy grandpapa, and a good relationship with the coupled Inu and Kikyo. True there was no lemons, but there doesn't have to be sex to create a following of a story. I loved how you wove this tale together, and even though it was not long it was still very nicely concieved and i'm sure you are proud of it--or you should be! ^ 3^

I am eager for my future reading of your other works, and i hope you found my review...fullfilling! *gives cookie platter*

this is such a great story!!!!!!! i absolutely loved it!!!!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh cliffy!!!   this story is awesome ! keep it up!

Love love love it^_^

*loves*

I have been searching for you and this story forever! I could never remember the title, just the plot, so that made it especially difficult. Also, I was almost certain you went by the name Priestess Sianna for a time. Is that correct or am I just completely wacked outta my gourd? Either way, I'm so glad I stumbled on this story again (and promptly fell in love with it all over again)

I also wanted to say, I especially enjoyed your own little twist to the Mating Ritual. While a fan of the biting, I always found myself comparing it to a Vampires (another genre I'm fond of) way of claiming, and the similarities always struck me as kinda unoriginal. So it was a very welcome change for someone to finally go in a different direction, managing to make it beautiful, interesting, and more importantly believable... well as believable as you can get when writing a story about Demons and Mikos. :)

Ok, I read this story a while back, I guess I forgot to review it for some stupid reason unknown. I totally loved it though!!! YAY SIanna!! :D

I love this story. I can't help but find myself reading it at least once a month. It is an amazingly written story between Sesshoumaru and Kagome.

i am really glad that i can read on this web page keep it up