I think you have a good polt going. One day you might think about expending on your idea and putting some more details into it. =)
it was okay except it passed too fast and the summary confused me it said she meets sesshoumaru after she sees them but in the story he shows up a little after her but other than that it was good keep up the good work like they say rome wasnt built in one day plus i think it better than anything i can come up with ^_^
Amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jun 2010
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