Awesome story and very satisfying ending. Absolutely did not see the Ah Un and Kirara relationship coming! lol

I find myself teetering between feeling that Kikyou got what she deserved and that she deserved worse. She definitely experienced the worst parts of being an ordinary woman..

Fantastic writing!

I enjoyed the story very much, some parts even brought a tear to my eye. I love the ending. 

Just finished reading this awesome story. Thank you for your excellent writing and sharing your creation with us. <3 <3 <3

I enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you for sharing your hard work and talent with us. 

I hope you continue with your craft and share with us again your world of magic. 

Cheers. 

Confession Time:

This story has been bookmarked on every website I could find it on. I love it that much and if it disappeared I could find it again. 

I did not find any spelling or anything to be an issue, I noticed someone posted about that. I personally did not find it distracting or annoying. 

The story is well written and as I said it's a favorite. I re-read it when I hit a slump of my own. I am glad to see you writing again and look forward to more work from you.  

Yay~ and welcome back! I hope things get better for you soon >.< This was always one of my favorites that sticks out in my mind when I think of the pairing.

hnnn... this Sesshoumaru doesn't have his "hnnn". 
well, the stroy is quite immature. You're not really sure of what you want to do to them and you have a lot of dark side in you which amuse me! and you don't know how they will normally react after some actions they did.

You're using japanese and you're using it wrong, most of the time. FIRST OF ALL is DAIYOUKAI!!! not 'taiyoukai'... ('taiyoukai' doesn't even exist in japanese). And SECOND!!! it's TESSAIGA!!! not 'tetsusaiga' x.x

hai; you're using it way to often... there could be also used 'ee' or 'un' or Sesshoumaru's 'hnnn' (it's not only his, anyway, and in japanese is 'nnn'). 'Hai', indeed, is more formal, but it's also used when you are commanded. And can be not necessary used between friends... 'ee', 'un' and 'nnn' and also 'sou'/'sou sou'/ 'sou desu' (that's right)  could be used freely.

arigato.. is actually arigatou. (we can skip it as other words)

there you put doshite correctly in the sentence (doushite correctly but anyway). 

Sesshoumaru-sama and lord Sesshoumaru means exactly the same thing x.x

The Jaken' 'Staff of Skulls' is Nintoujou ("Human Head Cane")

And an advice, use japanese only in small sentences... like just "Arigatou" or join it with another japanese word like "Zenbu de, arigatou!" (Thanks for everything). 'Arigatou for everything' doesn't look too great... :/ (well this is my opinion)

Excellent story, and wonderful ending.  I think I read the first 18 chapters a year ago, and I just saw on the updated story listing that this one was finished.  Since I couldn't remember exactly what I read a year ago, I started to reread the story and finished it.  And I'm glad I did!

Your writing style is excellent, and you are able to clearly show the emotions and life experiences of each of the characters clearly to reveal who they have become by the end.  Fantastic story, even if it is a dark fiction!

I hope this also means you might consider writing more stories in the future.  I look forward to anything you post.  Thank you again for finishing this wonderful story.

You came back? I haven't read the new chapter yet becuase I want to reread the story leading up to the end. I hope this spells a return to writing new stories as well.

Excellent, Excellent story. It was worth the wait. 

Are you adding on?! I remember reading this story years ago and it's one of my all time favorite!!! I guess I'll have to read it again to find out! ;)

Welcome back! I havent read the new chapter yet but I am excited to see it. Your writing is a thing of beauty from what I remember and i look forward to seeing it again. Hope you are well and you have a wonderful night.

I have read this story multiple times and I have enjoyed it. The only problem that really sticks out to me is the idiom in chapter nine, which should be hell-bent for leather. These types of sayings are easily used wrongly. We hear them wrong and learn them wrong. I just felt the need to bring it too your attention before someone not so nice did so. Thank you for your efforts. 

this story has been amazing so far. but i'm really confused! its been marked completed...but the last chapter isn't really any closure! is it on hiatus? or has it been abandoned? i would surely love to read more! :)

When are you going to finish this fiction? I'm really enjoying the plot line.

What I also wanted to mention is that your story does have a cool concept, and it is well written. Ultimately as the author, you are the one who decides how the relationship dynamic of the characters unfolds. I merely wanted to give you a possibly different look at how your characters' actions could be construed. 

I read this fic a long time ago when I was still probably in high school, and it's interesting how much changes in the way you read things as you get older. What I remember fondly as a romantic story gave me a terrible feeling when I read how Sesshomaru and Kagome start their sexual relationship. The acts Sesshomaru performed when Kagome was clearly not in any mental state to truly consent was clearly defined as assault and rape in my mind. I just couldn't get past that one facet of the story. I couldn't read any further to see if it improves, but it was impossible for me to find anything relating to consent in any form from Kagome. 

I want to read more i could not stop reading it until i got to the last chapter please oh please write more of this wonder story.!!!!

 i really love this story hope you update soon thank you.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!