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Vou-sama (Chapter 15) - Tue 10 Aug 2010

Beautiful, as always. Baka Inuyasha. >:(

But, to answer your question. . . as an avid lemon-fan, I would enjoy a scene between her and Sesshomaru. (:


Yoru-101 (Chapter 14) - Mon 09 Aug 2010

-punches Inuyasha's face 'til his skull caves in, wipes blood off forehead and laughs- Ahhhh...I feel much more calm now...

 

I am curious, Siki. Did you do an "Ascend into Adulthood" ceremony?


Yoru-101 (Chapter 13) - Mon 09 Aug 2010

Pretty ceremonies, reminding me of home -sighs, then cackles like a mad Kagome- INUYASHA, YOUR BABY WILL HAVE NO FATHERRRRRRRAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA......

I need some tea and a peace pipe.

And perhaps some more sleep...nah.

-sighs again- So many updates, so little time...

 


Lady Fluffy86 (Chapter 14) - Sun 08 Aug 2010

I would love to see a pronunciation key. i would love to try and learn how to say all of the new words i read.


*cathstar (Chapter 14) - Sun 08 Aug 2010

ARE YOU SUGGESTING COCONUTS MIGRATE?! 

 

I need to watch that movie again -_- ...anyways. I like angry!Kagome. *nods* Very much. But I really want to see what's gonna happen to Inuyasha - shotgun wedding or not D: Oh, gosh. Hurry up and heal Tooantuh! I want to see his reaction! D:

And here's some speculation for you: Kagome going away = Sesshoumaru's appearance?! In dream-verse or physically, doesn't matter. y/n/bribes of (insert favorite food)

And I vote 'yay' on pronunciation keys. 


BlueHeavensAngel (Chapter 13) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while.  I've been particularly slow on reading updates and reviewing for all the stories I watch lately.  

I find all these rituals really interesting.  I did particularly enjoy the name that Kagome bestowed no Inuyasha. lol.  :)  What song was in this chapter?  Is there a video of it on youtube so I can listen to it?


TruGemini (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

So Inuyasha will be forced to marry the other girl? LOL!! to be called a venereal disease. That was hilarious.  Good work yet again.


TruGemini (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Sorry i've been away from the story for a while. So we learn Inuyasha is the culprit behind the reason for the atacks. I knew he was no good. I hope he was punished good for this.


*cathstar (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Do I hear a shotgun wedding for Inuyasha? ..or not :/ 

I want to take the flowers coming back as a sign of her father's returning health? y/y/n/applesauce?


SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

I truly am amazed on how this story is turning out.  I love it.  I have not read a fic to this calibur in a long time.  I know writing the language of natives on a computer takes time and then some.  I am proud of the work you have written, not many if any at all actually look into the life of the native american or know how proud and spiritual they truly are.  I thank you.  Until next time.


Fish Wishes (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

I have only read the first chapter, but I wanted to tell you i am very excited to keep reading.

To interpret InuYahsa and its characters in a Native American setting is brilliant and original. I love the Native American traditions and I am excited to see how you incorporate them all.

Good luck with your writing, I am sure you’ll hear from me again.  =3


MissTeak (Chapter 12) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

OMG. Poor, poor, poor Kagome Papa. I really hope he would get well soon :( The descriptions of the wounds were so vivid; I could practically see it.

It's also very, very nice to see how Sesshoumaru comforts Kagome in the dream <3 She is such a lucky girl. *sigh* But the poor thing can only take so much before she goes crazy...her world is practically collapsing. I, as a reader, am enjoying the ride though.

And in the meantime, pardon me while I work on my latest invention. *metal clatters in the background + strange humming noises*

*brushes dust off hands*

*take a gulp of water*

...I AM DONE!!

NOW I HAVE CREATED A STORY-MACHINE (SOMETHING LIKE A TIME MACHINE) TO ENABLE ME TO ENTER THE FIC AND SKIN THAT STUPID, DAMNED INUYASHA ALIVE!!!!!!! *roars*

*kicks*

*packs more weapons like guns, rat poison, holy water, subjugation beads*


MissTeak (Chapter 11) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Of course this story would get those views, my dear! It is just that good!! :)

I am glad Kagome managed to see Sesshoumaru in her dreams again; he should really tell her more before something else happens. It'd be too late by then! He should stop trying to be mysterious, damnit. *kicks Sesshy plushie* LOL.

and...oh my god. I KNEW IT. I KNEW THAT WOULD HAPPEN.

WHYYYYYYY???!

*calms down* OK, Siki. You are really one of my fellow crazies. Much love to you!! <3

 


MissTeak (Chapter 10) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Earth to Kagome, earth to Kagome...

STOP IGNORING YOUR VISIONS.

Hrrrrrmph.

Sorry, Siki. I had to get that off my chest.

And well, I like Inuyasha too, and he is being SO in character with the 'so your mom died but that doesn't mean your dad's gonna die' thing. ARRRGH. Poor Kagome, I can totally see why she would be upset with him. This is pure insensitivity, and to label her as a jinx is not exactly nice, Inuyasha.

Now I want to give Kagome a big hug. These visions are bringing her so much unhappiness! :( And I really dread to think what might come next.


Mitsuki Aoi (Chapter 7) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

hey~

finally had time to leave a review.

So far I'm liking the way you're writing this~ I can imagine the scenes with ease and I can see them in my mind like I'm viewing a movie!

Though I still have a bit of a difficulty remembering the terms you used *since this is my first time encountering them* but it's very good to stay as accurate as possible to keep realism in tact~

Good Job! XD


MissTeak (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

*quivers*

The young woman heard the sorrowful tones of the death wail rise in the air, not even realizing that they came from her own throat.

Can it get any sadder than this?? :( Well done on writing such a powerful phrase with such simple words, though.

I think I understand better now why you said you chose to omit certain details from the death rituals...it can really get a little too emotional if it was included. But still, it was nicely written, and I could actually picture details in my mind, which makes the chapter well-written.


MissTeak (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

ZOMG major character death?? *reads Author's Note again* HMMMM. We've just talked about the character death issue and OMG now I am dreading it. I like to write deaths but for some strange reason, I don't like reading it as much. But of course, it really depends on the story!:)

ANGST. SOOOOO MUCH ANGST. *sad face x 1000000*

And Inuyasha is being the SAME OLD HIM AS ALWAYS. "Let's go blast them to bits", "Let's go avenge our brothers." BLAH BLAH BLAH. Kudos to you, dear Siki, for keeping him in character. LOL.

I am feeling sad for Tooantuh and Kagome and Souta though :( :( :(


MissTeak (Chapter 7) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Obviously, the best thing about reading a story after it has progressed to 13 chapters is how I don't have to wait for updates!! WOOHOO! I have a good 6 chapters to read at one go, and that makes me very happy indeed XD

Nice description there of Kagome's escape; it made my legs feel like sprinting too. LOL.

OH NO. Her mom died?! :( :( :( this is...tragic.

:( :( :(

The squirrel's tale was nice though, my dear. Nice weaving of culture into plot there!


MissTeak (Chapter 6) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

I was kinda envious of Kagome for seeing Sesshoumaru in her dreams ALL THE TIME BUT now, I am not quite sure if I am still envious of her. The dreams seem to be becoming scarier and scarier with every chapter, and I hope we can get to the bottom of it soon!

Poor Ehawee and the rest of the fellow villagers... :( I have so many questions in my mind now, but it will be really annoying of me if I type everything out, so...LOL. I shall be patient and read.


MissTeak (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Aug 2010

Oh dear, Kagome has to come to terms soon with the fact that she is a lot more than what she appears to be! That premonition she had was absolutely creepy...*rubs hard at goosebumps on arms* Gosh, I hope it doesn't mean more than what it seems...

DARN.

I should have seen it coming, seriously.

Oh gosh. let's hope it's not too bad.


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